Question

Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. Like everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy take pictures since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly．Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tiring that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow．ZXXK

Answer 1

【小題1】like→as
【小題2】加a
【小題3】加when
【小題4】them→us
【小題5】visiting→visited
【小題6】take→taking
【小題7】passes→passed
【小題8】and →but
【小題9】tiring→tired
【小題10】去掉at

解析試題分析： 本文屬于短文改錯(cuò)，要注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時(shí)態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應(yīng)用。一般的這類題型不會(huì)出現(xiàn)太復(fù)雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考查的就是我們的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)。平時(shí)應(yīng)注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)。
【小題1】like→as 本句是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句，as意為“正如…”。
【小題2】加a 后面的mountain是一個(gè)可數(shù)名詞，指峨眉山是一座著名的山。故加上a。
【小題3】加when 本句中when引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語從句，當(dāng)我們到達(dá)山腳的時(shí)候，即將到中午了。
【小題4】them→us 前面提就是我們來到峨眉山，故這里是指我們中的三個(gè)人。
【小題5】visiting→visited 本句是三個(gè)動(dòng)詞并列，fed, visited和told都使用過去式。
【小題6】take→taking 固定搭配be busy doing sth忙于做某事。
【小題7】passes→passed 本文講述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，故使用一般過去時(shí)。
【小題8】and →but 上下文之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。食物很貴，但是服務(wù)非常好。
【小題9】tiring→tired 使用過去非常轉(zhuǎn)換的形容詞tired對(duì)表示人的主語進(jìn)行修飾。
【小題10】去掉at 本句中的the moment已經(jīng)轉(zhuǎn)換成連詞，表示“一…就…”，所以前面不需要使用介詞at了。
考點(diǎn)：考察短文改錯(cuò)