文中共有l(wèi)0處語言錯誤,每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改l0處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。
The Great Wenchuan Earthquake was shocked we Chinese. Most people took out some of their money help the injured people. But our class were organized to collect money in the street at weekend. My team sent to a park. As soon as we get there, we began to work. We put up notices to tell people we were students from high school to collected money with the injured people in this Great Wenchuan Earthquake. When people saw us, they gave us their money generous. And soon we accepted a lot of money, we all felt the society is full of love. Though we were tired that day, we felt very happy.


【小題1】去掉was
【小題2】we-us
【小題3】help前面加 to
【小題4】But 改成 And 或 So
【小題5】 Sent前面加was
【小題6】get改成got
【小題7】collected 改成collect
【小題8】with改成for
【小題9】generous 改成 generously
【小題10】accept 改成 received

解析試題分析:文章講述為了幫助汶川地震受傷的人,作者的班級被組織周末到街上募捐,人們都慷慨的捐款,使作者覺得世界上是充滿了愛。
【小題1】汶川地震使中國人民很震驚。這里是主動語態(tài):去掉was
【小題2】這里用賓格us在句中和Chinese是同位語,做句中的賓語
【小題3】人們拿出一些錢幫助受傷的人。To help是不定式做目的狀語
【小題4】我們班被組織周末到街上募捐,兩句話是并列關(guān)系也可以理解成因果關(guān)系,But 改成 And 或 So
【小題5】我們隊被派到公園。是被動含義, Sent前面加was
【小題6】我們一到那里,就開始工作,用一般過去式:get改成got
【小題7】我們張貼布告告訴人們我們是學(xué)校的學(xué)生來為大地震的傷員籌集錢的。這里是不定式做目的狀語:collected 改成collect
【小題8】介詞for表示“為了”,
【小題9】人們慷慨的捐錢。generous 改成 generously,修飾gave us their money
【小題10】很快我們就收到很多錢。Accept是主觀接受, received 是客觀收到。
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