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9．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
   Isaac Asimov was an American scientist and a writer who wrote about 480 books，among those his best known work was his science fiction stories．He was born in Russia in January 2，1920．When he was three year old，he moved to New York City with his parents．In 1941，he gained his Master's degree in chemistry．From 1942 to 1945，he works as a junior chemist at the Philadelphia Navy Yard．It was Asimov's extraordinary imagination and amazing mind made him a great writer．Throughout his life，Asimov received much awards，both for his science fiction books and his science books，and unfortunately on April 6，1992，Asimov dead as a result of an HIV infection that he had got from a blood transfusion nine years early．

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分析 艾薩克•阿西莫夫是美國的科學(xué)家兼作家．他寫過大約480本書，其中最有名的作品還是他的科幻小說．阿西莫夫超凡的想象力使他成為一位偉大的作家．他于1920年1月2日出生在俄羅斯；1992年4月6日死于紐約．他是因為九年前的一次輸血中感染了艾滋病毒而去世的．

解答 Isaac Asimov was an American scientist and a writer who wrote about 480 books，among those his best known work was his science fiction stories．He was born in Russia in January 2，1920．When he was three year old，he moved to New York City with his parents．In 1941，he gained his Master's degree in chemistry．From 1942 to 1945，he works as a junior chemist at the Philadelphia Navy Yard．It was Asimov's extraordinary imagination and amazing mind∧made him a great writer．Throughout his life，Asimov received much awards，both for his science fiction books and his science books，and unfortunately on April 6，1992，Asimov dead as a result of an HIV infection that he had got from a blood transfusion nine years early．
詳解：
1．去掉a；考查冠詞，an American scientist and a writer 意為"一位科學(xué)家和一位作家"指兩個人；an American scientist and writer意為"一位科學(xué)家兼作家"指同一個人，結(jié)合句意此處要把不定冠詞a去掉． 
2．those改為which；考查定語從句，這是一個定語從句，關(guān)系代詞前面有介詞among，先行詞480books指物，故關(guān)系代詞只能用which．
3．in改為on；考查介詞，具體點在某一天時要用介詞on．
4．year改為years；考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，前面有three修飾，故year用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
5．works改為worked；考查動詞的時態(tài)，本文講述過去發(fā)生的事情，故用一般過去時．
6．made前面加that；考查強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)發(fā)現(xiàn)這是一個"It is/was+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that從句"的強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，其中的that不能省略．
7．much改為many；考查近義詞辨析，much修飾不可數(shù)名詞，滿意修飾可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，此處awards是復(fù)數(shù)形式，故用many．
8．a(chǎn)nd改為but；考查連詞，分析句意為"但是不幸的是…"前后文之間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用連詞but．
9．dead改為died；考查謂語動詞，分析句子成分可知此處缺少謂語動詞，dead是形容詞，意為"死的"，又因動作發(fā)生在過去，故用動詞die的過去式died．
10．early改為earlier；考查固定用法，earlier用于一個時間段的后面，表示"多長時間之前"．

點評 通過快速閱讀短文了解短文的基本大意，再分析句子間的結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系，從詞義，詞性，固定短語，句式結(jié)構(gòu)等方面去找文中存在的錯誤加以修改．