Question

假設(shè)你是李華，在得知4月20日8時02分四川雅安廬山地震的消息之后，作為校學(xué)生會主席，你決定給災(zāi)區(qū)的中學(xué)生寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1、得知四川發(fā)生地震災(zāi)害，心情非常難過;
2、看到你們表現(xiàn)得非常鎮(zhèn)定、堅強，很感動;
3、患難見真情，全校師生向你們表示慰問的同時，共計捐款20萬元;
4、美好家園可以重建，希望你們要看到希望、充滿信心。
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Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear friends,
　　I’m sorry to hear that at eight two on April 20, 2013, an earthquake unexpectedly hit your hometown. Faced with such a rarely-seen disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Thinking about your present situation, we can not wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you. I, as the chairman of student union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere pity and care for you. Besides, we make a donation of 200 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty. A better hometown can be rebuilt. Therefore, never give up whatever happens. Remember we won’t be far away when you need any help!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua

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【亮點說明】 Faced with such a rarely-seen disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears.這句話里面有過去分詞做狀語， A friend in need is a friend indeed.這是一句諺語，Thinking about your present situation, we can not wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you.這是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， I, as the chairman of student union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere pity and care for you. we make a donation of 200 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty. 這句話用了on behalf of代表，和現(xiàn)在分詞，Therefore, never give up whatever happens. 這句話里面有讓步狀語從句，Remember we won’t be far away when you need any help! 這句話有時間狀語從句，文章還用Besides,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。
考點：考查提綱類作文