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15．據(jù)報道，2016年里約熱內(nèi)盧奧運會將選拔約十萬志愿者為之服務(wù)．請你以"Dos and Don'ts for the 2016 Olympic Volunteers"為題，用英語寫一篇短文，討論志愿者應(yīng)該做什么，不應(yīng)該做什么．短文應(yīng)包括下表中的內(nèi)容：

Dos	Don'ts
1．待人禮貌、友好	1．避免不得體的言行
2．堅守崗位	2．不忘履行自己的職責(zé)
3．介紹巴西歷史和文化	3．不損害祖國的形象
如果你成為志愿者，你還應(yīng)該做什么，不應(yīng)該做什么．        （內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定）

注意：1．對所給要點，不要簡單翻譯，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
      2．字數(shù)120左右．短文中已寫好了的部分，不計入詞數(shù)
      3．參考詞匯：形象--image
Dos and Don'ts for the 2016 Olympic Volunteers
It is reported that about 100，000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2016 Olympic Games in Rio．What should the volunteers do and what should they not do？

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息以"Dos and Don'ts for the 2016 Olympic Volunteers"為題，用英語寫一篇短文，討論志愿者應(yīng)該做什么，不應(yīng)該做什么．，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從Dos和Don'ts兩個方面來討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：Firstly首先，Secondly其次，Thirdly第三，make friends with與…交朋友，besides另外，
Firstly，they should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world，and avoid improper behaviour．（高分句型一）
Secondly，they should stick to their posts，offering good services，satisfying any reasonable needs and being ready to help those in difficulty，and never fail to do their duty．（高分句型二）
Thirdly，they should introduce the Chin ese culture and history to foreigners so that they may know China better and never say or do anything that harms the image of our motherland．（高分句型三）

解答 It is reported that about 100，000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2016 Olympic Games in Rio．What should the volunteers do and what should they not do？
    Firstly，they should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world，and avoid improper behaviour．（高分句型一）Secondly，they should stick to their posts，offering good services，satisfying any reasonable needs and being ready to help those in difficulty，and never fail to do their duty．（高分句型二）Thirdly，they should introduce the Chin ese culture and history to foreigners so that they may know China better and never say or do anything that harms the image of our motherland．（高分句型三）
    If I have the honour to be chosen as a volunteer，besides the above，I will work hard and creatively，but never be lazy．I will follow the law and disciplining，but never break them．I will take the opportunity to make friends with the athletes and visitors，and help make the 2016 Olympic Games a great success．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．