Question

20．假如你是李華，正在一所美國(guó)學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)英文．你對(duì)學(xué)校的周末音樂(lè)俱樂(lè)部（Music Club at Weekend）很感興趣，決定申請(qǐng)加入． 現(xiàn)給該俱樂(lè)部負(fù)責(zé)人寫(xiě)一封信，內(nèi)容如下：
1．表示有意加入
2．介紹英語(yǔ)特長(zhǎng)
3．說(shuō)明性格優(yōu)勢(shì)
4．期待滿意答復(fù)
注意：1．詞數(shù)120 左右 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking the English course at our school．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息對(duì)學(xué)校的周末音樂(lè)俱樂(lè)部（Music Club at Weekend）很感興趣，決定申請(qǐng)加入． 現(xiàn)給該俱樂(lè)部負(fù)責(zé)人寫(xiě)一封信，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：表示有意加入；介紹英語(yǔ)特長(zhǎng)；說(shuō)明性格優(yōu)勢(shì)；期待滿意答復(fù)2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)take the English course上英文課，if possible如果可能的話，be good at 擅長(zhǎng)，play the piano彈鋼琴，above all最重要的是，Look forward to 盼望
I'm interested in Music Club at weekend and I'd like to join it if possible．（高分句型一）
I have been playing the piano for more than 14 years and I once won the third p；ace in a nation-wide piano playing competition．（高分句型二）
As for my personalities，I think I'm open-minded，friendly and easy-going，and above all，I really enjoy making friends with people from all around the world．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
    I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking the English course at our school．I'm interested in Music Club at weekend and I'd like to join it if possible．（高分句型一）I'm good at playing the piano．I have been playing the piano for more than 14 years and I once won the third p；ace in a nation-wide piano playing competition．（高分句型二）Also I can sing Chinese fork songs very well．As for my personalities，I think I'm open-minded，friendly and easy-going，and above all，I really enjoy making friends with people from all around the world．（高分句型三）I would be very happy if I can be admitted into the club!Looking forward to your reply!
   Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．