Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

A young couple bought a big house from two sisters, whom had lived there for 30 years. The house was nice and the couple bought it at low price.

However, winter wasn’t far away at the time. The couple was a little bit worrying about how they would keep the house warm, since it didn’t have any fireplaces. And later, they thought that if the sisters were able to stay warm and comfortably in the house during the winter, so could they. With that in mind, they decided not to make any preparations for the cold weather.

Winter arrived and temperatures soon drops below zero. The large house became freezing cold, with frost（霜）covered the walls. Finally, the husband couldn’t bear with it anymore. She called the sisters to ask them how they managed to keep warm during the winter. “The cold weather never bothered us,” one of the sister told the husband. “We just went on vacation to Thailand every winter.”

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】這是一篇記敘文。本文主要講了一對夫妻以低價買了姐姐的房子，冬天到了，房子里因為沒有火所以很冷，最初他們認為既然姐姐都能在這個房間里過冬，他們也可以，但是最終他們受不了寒冷。

第一處：考查關(guān)系代詞。Whom在定語從句中只能作賓語，不能作主語，需改為who，故將whom改為who。

第二處：考查冠詞。Price為可數(shù)名詞，這里指的是以低價購買，所以需用冠詞a，故需在at后加a。

第三處：考查固定短語。be worried abut擔(dān)心，為固定短語，而且worrying是用來修飾物的，故需將worrying改為worried。

第四處：考查連詞。前一句提到他們擔(dān)心房間沒有火會冷，后一句提到他們認為他們的姐姐能夠住的很暖和，他們也可以，前后是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，and表是順承關(guān)系，需改為but表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故需將and改為but。

第五處：考查形容詞。Stay作為連系動詞，表示處于某種狀態(tài)，其后需接形容詞作表語，所以這里需將comfortably改為comfortable。

第六處：考查時態(tài)。本文時態(tài)為一般過去時，所以這里的謂語動詞需用過去時，故需將drops改為dropped。

第七處：考查with的用法。該句是with引導(dǎo)的獨立主格結(jié)果，frost與cover之間是主動關(guān)系，所以這里需用現(xiàn)在分詞，故需將covered改為covering。

第八處：考查動詞。這里指的是丈夫忍不了了，bear作容忍講時為及物動詞，直接接賓語，所以需將with去掉。

第九處：考查人稱代詞。前面主語指的是the husband，所以這里需將人稱代詞she改為he。

第十處：考查名詞。One of后接名詞復(fù)數(shù)，所以這里需將sister改為sisters。