Question

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請?jiān)谟绣e誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(Λ)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred Yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine what happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

Answer 1

【小題1】friend → friends
【小題2】it → one
【小題3】that →which
【小題4】加上for
【小題5】he → I
【小題6】去掉the
【小題7】pleasing → pleased
【小題8】after → later
【小題9】gives → gave
【小題10】what →how

解析試題分析：
【小題1】… most of my friend had bicycles. 改為friends. （most of + 可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù) / 不可數(shù)名詞）
【小題2】I hoped I could also have it. 改為one （it指代同一件東西；one指代同一類事物）
【小題3】…, that was only one hundred Yuan. 改為which （that不引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）
【小題4】I asked my father ∧ the money. 加上for （向某人索要某物：ask sb. for .sth.）
【小題5】He should find the other half myself. 改為I （父親說給我一半買車的錢，另一半必須“我”自己想辦法）
【小題6】So I went to sell newspapers after the school. 去掉the （after school, 固定用法，意為“放學(xué)后”）
【小題7】My father was pleasing when… 改為pleased （pleased, 感到高興；pleasing, 令人高興）
【小題8】…when I showed him the money a month after. 改為later （later, 副詞，意為“后來”； after, 介詞或連詞，后接名詞或句子）
【小題9】He gives me the other fifty. 改為gave （時(shí)態(tài)錯誤。父親“給”錢發(fā)生于過去）
【小題10】You can imagine what happy I was… 改為how （what是代詞，后接名詞；how是副詞，后接形容詞或副詞。happy是形容詞，前面應(yīng)用how）
考點(diǎn)：短文改錯