Question

近年來，住房問題已經(jīng)成為媒體關(guān)注的焦點，如何解決住房問題是許多大城市面臨的最嚴重的問題之一，針對這個問題，人們想出了許多解決的辦法，請根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇短文，具體解決方法如下;
多建高層建筑，可容納更多的人
向地下發(fā)展
在郊區(qū)建房子，擴大城市規(guī)模，減輕城市人口壓力
政府積極出臺相應政策，防止房價過高
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100-120左右；
2．要點齊全，并適當發(fā)揮，以使行文流暢
3. 標題已給出
參考詞匯：高層建筑—  high-rise apartment        郊區(qū)- suburb
The House Problem in Big Cities

Answer 1

In recent years more and more people in big cities complain that they can’t afford an apartment, People come up with many ideas to solve this problem.
The first suggestion is building more high-rise apartments which can hold more people in the same area. Some people suggested developing underground housing areas which costs less. Besides, it is a good way to build house in suburbs, thus enlarging the scale of cities and reducing the crowdness of cities. Moreover, people are expecting the government to take efficient measures to control the house price.
Anyway, I hope the housing problem will be solved properly in the near future so that more people in big cities will have their own house.

解析試題分析：提綱式作文。作文的評分標準中主要有三個方面，一是內(nèi)容，本題目內(nèi)容題示較多，重點展示解決住房問題的方法，提示了四個方面，在寫作過程中不可提綱式翻譯，可適當調(diào)整位置以及主次要分明，二是復雜的句型和高級詞匯，要注意對復雜結(jié)構(gòu)如倒裝，強調(diào)等的運用。三是句子，段落之間的銜接。
【亮點說明】作為高考評分標準中的說明有這么一條，在高考作文中要盡量使用高考詞匯和復雜句型，Besides, it is a good way to build house in suburbs, thus enlarging the scale of cities and reducing the crowdness of cities.本句中巧妙的使用了It is +adj+to do 固定句型以及thus doing結(jié)構(gòu)，使語言豐富。
結(jié)尾表達了作者的希望運用了目的狀語從句。
【考點】考查語言表達能力。