Question

7．假設(shè)你是高中生李華，有感于校園中存在的隨意涂寫（to scribble） 和亂丟垃圾（to litter）的行為，請(qǐng)用英語給校長(zhǎng)寫一封100-120個(gè)詞的信．信中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：
1．說明寫信目的；
2．對(duì)這些行為進(jìn)行批評(píng)；
3．提出兩點(diǎn)建議．
注意：信的抬頭、落款及信得第一句已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）．
Dear Mr．Headmaster，
I am Li Hua，a student from Class 1，SeniorⅠ．
I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students：litter and scribbling．（寫信的目的）
It makes our school dirty and unpleasant，and does harm to the image of our school．I always feel ashamed whenever I see this．【高分句型】It is clearly not appropriate for astudent to litter and scribble about．【高分句型】（對(duì)不良行為進(jìn)行批評(píng)）
I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specified rules against such behaviour．【高分句型】At the same time，students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves．I believe that，with the joint efforts of both teachers and students，our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future．Thank you for your consideration．（提出建議）

Yours faithfully，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料，寫一封信給校長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)求關(guān)注校園中的不良行為，屬應(yīng)用文．要點(diǎn)包括：說明寫信的目的；對(duì)這些行為進(jìn)行批評(píng)；提出建議．寫作時(shí)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第一人稱為主．重要短語：draw one's attention to sth （吸引某人的主意），do harm to （損壞，損害），feel ashamed（感到羞恥），set up （建立），develop good habits （養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣），with the joint efforts of （共同的努力）．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：
It makes our school dirty and unpleasant，and does harm to the image of our school．I always feel ashamed whenever I see this．【高分句型】
It is clearly not appropriate for astudent to litter and scribble about．【高分句型】
I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specified rules against such behaviour．【高分句型】

解答 Dear Mr．Headmaster，
      I am Li Hua，a student from Class 1，SeniorⅠ．I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students：litter and scribbling．（寫信的目的）
      It makes our school dirty and unpleasant，and does harm to the image of our school．I always feel ashamed whenever I see this．【高分句型】It is clearly not appropriate for astudent to litter and scribble about．【高分句型】（對(duì)不良行為進(jìn)行批評(píng)）
       I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specified rules against such behaviour．【高分句型】At the same time，students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves．I believe that，with the joint efforts of both teachers and students，our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future．Thank you for your consideration．（提出建議）
                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．