Question

6．母親節(jié)快到了，學(xué)校將組織一次英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)以"Mother's Day"為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿．
要點(diǎn)：
1．母親節(jié)：
1）起源于：古希臘
2）時(shí)間：在5月的第二個(gè)星期日
3）目的：感謝她們的辛勤勞動(dòng)；使母親愉快地過(guò)節(jié)
4）活動(dòng)：母親盛裝打扮；孩子們贈(zèng)送禮物；對(duì)母親說(shuō)："我愛(ài)你!"
5）母親的反應(yīng)：感到自豪、滿(mǎn)足．
2．你對(duì)母親節(jié)的看法．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100-120左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
2．詞匯：古希臘（ancient Greece）
Good morning everybody!It's my honor to stand here and make a speech about"Mother's Day"．
                                                    
That's all．Thank you for your listening．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇演講稿，要求根據(jù)所給的提示內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一則演講稿．注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1．演講稿的格式，稱(chēng)呼、結(jié)語(yǔ)；2．仔細(xì)閱讀題目，不要漏掉題中要點(diǎn)，注意要提到自己的看法．3．運(yùn)用多種句型，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用一些高級(jí)詞匯，給文章增色．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章恰當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用了演講稿的格式，要點(diǎn)齊全，層次分明，條理清晰．運(yùn)用了多種句式，如It is an international festival which is celebrated on the second Sunday of May．是定語(yǔ)從句，詞匯豐富多變，如has its origin in起源于，try their best to 盡力，dress up盛裝打扮，As far as I'm concerned我認(rèn)為等，使得文章讓人眼前一亮．

解答 Good morning everybody!It's my honor to stand here and make a speech about"Mother's Day"．
Mother's Day has its origin in ancient Greece．It is an international festival which is celebrated on the second Sunday of May．（高分句型）In order to thank them for their years'of hard work，people always try their best to make their mothers spend the festival happily．（高分句型）On the day，every mother will dress up．And children will offer gifts to their mothers，saying"I love you!"At the words，their mothers will feel very proud and satisfied．
As far as I'm concerned，it is important to celebrate Mother's Day．（高分句型）On the day，mothers will feel relaxed both mentally and physically．So the family should get together and have fun with each other．（高分句型）
That's all．Thank you for your listening．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡(jiǎn)單句而造成的單調(diào)感．（1）認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁． （2）構(gòu)思要點(diǎn)．根據(jù)題目要求，理解要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)．設(shè)計(jì)好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)等，把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，構(gòu)成文章框架．（3）選詞造句，避難選易．（4）認(rèn)真檢查，避免錯(cuò)誤．仔細(xì)閱讀全文，查找是否有錯(cuò)，注意時(shí)態(tài)、單詞拼寫(xiě)、字母大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否一致．