Question

閱讀下面文章，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文
With the development of information industry, our personal information has become more easily exposed in public．As some celebrities are worried about their telephone number, ID number and home address being put on the Internet, ordinary people like us can't escape from the doom either．
A recent report from Xinhua reveals over twenty telephone-salespeople have been caught cheating customers by revealing their private information to local community of Beijing．
The report says the salespeople would call their potential customers trying to earn their trust by correctly revealing their personal information such as their name, telephone number, home address and even previous purchases．
They would then try to persuade the customer to buy a gold cellphone by mail．If the customer became suspicious, they would use another person's identity to prove their authenticity．
寫作內(nèi)容：
你在某英文報刊看到這則報導(dǎo)后，準(zhǔn)備就我們學(xué)生該“ How can we keep our personal information off the Internet?”寫一篇文章給該報編輯部，題目是“How can we keep our personal information off the Internet?”。
內(nèi)容要點包括： 
1．以約30詞簡要概括新聞內(nèi)容；                 
2．然后以約120詞談?wù)勀愕挠^點，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）在信息時代,想讓個人信息完全與世隔絕是不可能的,但可盡量減少;
（2）你為解決信息泄露所采取的一些措施:
A．到有安全保障的網(wǎng)站買東西;
B．只向能確保你個人信息安全的網(wǎng)站提供個人信息;
C．其它一些你認為有效的措施．
寫作要求： 
1．可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．文章開頭己給出，不計入單詞總數(shù)。
評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

How can we keep our personal information off the Internet?
As is reported , more and more people are annoyed by strangers because our personal information ,such as phone numbers, Emails and so on, is exposed to the Internet．
It’s almost impossible to keep all personal information off the internet．However, we can take some measures to minimize the amount of information we reveal as we travel the internet．
First, shopping online is the ultimate in convenience, but we muse make sure that the checkout page on the site is secure．Secondly, we can only provide information to sites that promise not to share it without our permission and avoid giving permission to share our information with "selected partners"．Besides, we shouldn’t post too much information on social networking sites, message boards and chat rooms．And chat rooms are meant for sharing．And if we blog, we should be careful not to reveal too much about ourselves．
Obviously, the larger an online presence we have, the more information about us there is going to be online．An online presence is not necessarily a bad thing, as it can open a whole world of opportunities．

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