Question

15．最近，你們班就"是否應(yīng)該幫助陌生人"展開了討論，同學們就這一話題意見不一，你的看法如何？你認為怎樣才能讓愛心回歸社會，建立人與人之間的信任？請根據(jù)討論結(jié)果，以"Should We Help Strangers？"為題寫一篇短文．

	原　因
贊成	幫助他人是美德； 幫助他人就是幫助自己； …
反對	怕陷入麻煩，甚至危險； 怕被誤解； …
你的觀點？（至少兩點）

注意：1．詞數(shù)150個左右；
     2．開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
     3．覆蓋所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮；
     4．文中不得提及考生所在學校及本人姓名．
     參考詞匯：美德virtue
 Should We Help Strangers？
We used to appreciate those who like to help strangers．                          

Answer 1

分析 考察正反觀點議論文．討論的話題是"是否應(yīng)該幫助陌生人"，有正反兩方面的觀點．要點都給了出來．本文題型是考生非常熟悉的正反觀點類的議論文，在平時的練習中也有相應(yīng)的模板．審題時注 意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第三人稱為主，發(fā)表個人意見時使用第一人稱．本文的要點均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點聯(lián)系成文．如for one thing，for another； besides，firstly，secondly，last but not least等．也要使用一些高級的詞匯詞組如 be supposed to do sth，benefit 等以提升文章的檔次分．在文章紅可以適當使用一至兩句諺語如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高獲得高分的可能性．
【亮點說明】：本文中的高級結(jié)構(gòu)還是較多的，如whether they are strangers or not．中的whether…or not
Only if everyone tries a little kindness，will society be full of love and trust be established between people．中的倒裝句．Opinions are divided on this topic．以及n need of這個短語運用也較好．同時連接詞的使用很到位，如However，In my opinion等．

解答 Should we help strangers？
     We used to appreciate those who like to help strangers．But nowadays people tend to be very cautious of helping strangers．Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．（高分句型）Opinions are divided on this topic．
     Some think we should try to help others whether they are strangers or not．Helping others is a virtue，and it will make our society more harmonious．（高分句型）Besides，to some extent，helping others is helping oneself．We may come across some trouble and need others'help some day．If everyone turns a blind eye to our trouble and turns a deaf ear to our appeal for aid just because we are strangers to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like．（高分句型）
     However，others are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble or even put us in danger．（高分句型） Sometimes we are just misunderstood and thus have to pay the cost of kindness．
     In my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves to avoid getting into trouble．Only if everyone tries a little kindness，will society be full of love and trust be established between people．（高分句型）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．