Question

在你的人生成長道路上有很多幫助過你的人。請用英語寫一篇短文描寫其中一位給你幫助最大的人，并說說你將如何回報他/她。
要求：詞數120左右。

Answer 1

On the journey of my growth, there are many people who have cared about me and helped me when I’m in trouble. Among them, the most important one is my grandma.
In my early years, my parents left home because of their work. So I lived with my grandma until eleven years old. During those days, it was my grandma who looked after me. She also taught me a lot of useful knowledge which will contribute to my success in life. She is a Chinese teacher, so owing to her help my writing skill is better than most students in my class. I really feel proud of my grandma
It is my grandma who gave me a happy and rich childhood. So when I grow to an adult, I will live up to her expectations, which I think is the best thing I can do to please her. Besides, I will certainly set aside as much time as possible to keep her company so that she will not feel lonely. I wish my grandma will live a happy  old-age life.

解析試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。在你的人生成長道路上有很多幫助過你的人。請用英語寫一篇短文描寫其中一位給你幫助最大的人，并說說你將如何回報他/她。需要寫的話題已經給出，需要我們就這一話題寫文章。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點說明】On the journey of my growth, there are many people who have cared about me and helped me when I’m in trouble.這里含有一個定語從句。During those days, it was my grandma who looked after me.這里含有一個強調句。She also taught me a lot of useful knowledge which will contribute to my success in life.這里含有一個定語從句。
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