Question

假如你是高中一年級新生李華。開學之初，你的英語老師Rita 希望了解每位同學的英語學習情況，并征求教學建議。請按以下要點用英語給她寫一封信。
1.對英語學習的認識；2.自己目前的英語水平；3.自己英語學習存在的主要問題；4.對英語教學的兩點建議。注意：1. 詞數100左右；2. 信的開頭和結尾已給出。
Dear Rita,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
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Thank you!
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Rita,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
With the development of science and technology, the world is becoming a global village; so English is getting more and more important. What’s more, only by having a good command of English can we see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. As a result, I’m not as active as other students in English class.
I’d be grateful if you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I do believe we can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇書信類作文。假如你是高中一年級新生李華。開學之初，你的英語老師Rita 希望了解每位同學的英語學習情況，并征求教學建議。請按以下要點用英語給她寫一封信。1.對英語學習的認識；2.自己目前的英語水平；3.自己英語學習存在的主要問題；4.對英語教學的兩點建議。所以要用第一人稱來寫。需要寫的內容已經給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數100左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點說明】only by having a good command of English can we see the world through a new window.這個句子用了部分倒裝，My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart,這個句子用了表語從句，I’d be grateful if you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.這個句子用了賓語從句。