Question

Sometime in February, my teacher told us about the city speech contest, its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”. I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic. Then I carefully prepared for contest. A couple of weeks later, after the first round I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! The final was held soon. I was the sixth to presenting the speech. How a relief when I finished it! After the last person finished, the judge made their final decisions and announced that I have won first prize. The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering! I was extremely happy. It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it.

Answer 1

【小題1】its前加and 或把its改為whose或者刪掉topic后的was
【小題2】thought 后刪of
【小題3】for 后加the
【小題4】choosing →chosen
【小題5】presenting→ present
【小題6】How→ What
【小題7】judge →judges
【小題8】have →had
【小題9】wildly→ wild
【小題10】such →so

解析試題分析: 在本文中作者講述了自己參加市演講比賽的情況，演講的話題是“People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”。作者認(rèn)真地準(zhǔn)備了這次演講比賽，結(jié)果榮獲了演講比賽一等獎(jiǎng)，他永遠(yuǎn)也不會(huì)忘記那一刻。
【小題1】its前加and 或把its改為whose或者刪掉topic后的was 。  its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”.分析結(jié)構(gòu)可知前后兩個(gè)句子中間沒(méi)連詞，所以可以把its改為whose成為定語(yǔ)從句，也可以在its前加and構(gòu)成并列句；也可以去掉topic成為獨(dú)立主格，故答案是its 改為whose或 its前加and 或刪topic后的was 。
【小題2】thought 后刪of 。I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic. 介詞of后只跟名詞，代詞動(dòng)名詞做賓語(yǔ)，不跟陳述句做賓語(yǔ)從句，故去掉of。
【小題3】for 后加the 。 Then I carefully prepared for contest. 此處的contest是特指上文提到的演講比賽，故前面加定冠詞the。
【小題4】choosing →chosen 。I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! 句子主語(yǔ)I 和謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)該用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，所以把choosing改為chosen。
【小題5】presenting→ present 。I was the sixth to presenting the speech. 修飾序數(shù)詞the first、the second、the last等后面用動(dòng)詞不定式，所以把presenting改為present。
【小題6】How→ What 。How a relief when I finished it ! 感嘆句中對(duì)名詞進(jìn)行感嘆需要用what，句型：what +（形容詞）名詞+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)，所以把How改為What。
【小題7】judge →judges 。the judge made their final decisions. 根據(jù)句中的their decisions可以判斷有多名裁判，故把judge改為judges。
【小題8】have →had have →had and announced that I have won first prize. 主句謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞是一般過(guò)去時(shí)，賓語(yǔ)從句應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)的相應(yīng)形式，根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容可以判斷應(yīng)該用過(guò)去完成時(shí)，故把have改為had。
【小題9】wildly→ wild 。The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering ! 動(dòng)詞go在句中是系動(dòng)詞，后面應(yīng)該跟形容詞做表語(yǔ)，故把wildly改為wild。
【小題10】such →so 。It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it. 在such/so…..that句型中，such 修飾名詞，so修飾形容詞和副詞，所以把such改為so。
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。