Question

5．請就"低碳生活"這一話題，用英語寫一篇講話稿，內(nèi)容要點應包括：

部分同學的生活習慣	你的看法（不少于兩點）
乘坐私家車上學	…
亂扔垃圾
不注意隨手關燈，浪費電力資源；用水不節(jié)約，浪費水資源

注意：
1．發(fā)言稿必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮；2．發(fā)言稿開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；3．詞數(shù)：100左右．
4．參考詞匯：
Dear friends，
As we all know，we are damaging the environment．Therefore，it's very important for us to form low-carbon living habits_________________________________________________
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇發(fā)言稿，實際是一篇話題作文，要求根據(jù)所給題目寫一篇表達自己觀點的作文．要仔細讀表格中所給的內(nèi)容信息，要把表格中的要點信心擴展成一個個完整的句子，然后根據(jù)文章的中心話題和要求，把這些要點連句成文．運用多種句型適當運用高級詞匯來增添文章的色彩．本文句式多樣靈活，使用了一些連接詞使文章更加通順．
亮點句型一：As we all know，we are damaging the environment．眾所周知，我們正在破壞著環(huán)境．這是一個由as引導的非限制性定語從句，關系代詞as指代主句we are damaging the environment的內(nèi)容．
亮點句型二：All these are bad habits which will surely do harm to our environment．所有這些都是壞習慣，肯定會損害我們的環(huán)境．這是一個限制性定語從句，先行詞是habits，在從句which will surely do harm to our environment中做主語．

解答 As we all know，we are damaging the environment．（亮點句型一）Therefore，it's very important for us to form low-carbon living habits．However，bad living habits are still very common among us students．Some of us go to school by car，and some others are seen throwing waste casually everythere．Some even often leave lights on all night long or keep water running all the time when not necessary．All these are bad habits which will surely do harm to our environment（亮點句型二）．【如何做到地攤生活】
In my opinion，to form healthy low-carbon living habits，we should use as little energy as possible．It is important to turn off the lights and anything else electrical when not in use．Besides，planting trees can contribute to protecting the environment，which is cheap and easy．【表達觀點】
That's all．Thank you!

點評 本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．