【題目】假如你是李華,即將參加高考,結(jié)束自己的高中生活。你想寫一封電子郵件給一位你高中時期最尊敬的老師,對他或者她這幾年來的關(guān)心和幫助表示感謝。

內(nèi)容要求:

1. 他或者她最讓你感動的一件事情

2. 你的感想

3. 對老師表示祝福

注意:

1. 不少于120詞

2. 不得透露與考生相關(guān)的姓名、學(xué)校名稱以及地區(qū)名稱等;

3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫,表達(dá)順暢。

Dear Mr./Ms. Wang,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Mr./Ms Wang,

How time flies! I clearly remember the moment when I just stepped into high school. Now I am going to participate in the national college entrance examination and say goodbye to my high school life. Here I want to say you are one of my best-loved teachers for helping me with my study and caring about my life.

There was a time when I got a really low score in an examination. On seeing the results, I could not help burying my head on the desk and weeping. But you were so insightful to observe my sadness and depression that I tried hard to hide. To my surprise, you let me follow you to your office after class and then told me that victory and defeat were both common in life. It’s your words that rebuilt my confidence and courage. So here I really thank you for all you have done for me during my stay in high school and will never forget the days I spent with you.

I sincerely hope you can take good care of yourself instead of being too dedicated to ignore your health. Wish you happiness and fitness.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析:本文是提綱類作文,要點已給出,寫作時可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫,同時要把所提示的點寫全,語句通順,同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞,同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】本文是一篇電子郵件,采用三段式,內(nèi)容齊全,結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),布局合理,運用高級句子。I clearly remember the moment when I just stepped into high school. When引導(dǎo)定語從句;But you were so insightful to observe my sadness and depression that I tried hard to hide.句中使用結(jié)果狀語從句;after class and then told me that victory and defeat were both common in life. That引導(dǎo)賓語從句;It’s your words that rebuilt my confidence and courage.強(qiáng)調(diào)句式堪稱經(jīng)典;另外,On seeing the results, To my surprise, Wish you happiness and fitness.的運用為文章增色添彩。

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