Question

你接受了一項寫作任務(wù)，要為英語校報寫一篇人物介紹。

［寫作內(nèi)容］
請根據(jù)以下信息，介紹一位人物
［寫作要求］
只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。
「評分標(biāo)準］
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     

Answer 1

Chris Stack, 34, a brave British man，whose health condition was so bad that he was warned three times by doctors that he would be dying, has been operated on his lung and heart. In spite of that, Chris tried to live longer to accompany his wife and children. Five years ago, he decided to take part in the running training and he has joined in many competitions of different levels. Now he is preparing himself for the Great Birmingham Run. All people think he is becoming healthier and more and more confident.

解析試題分析：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。
【亮點說明】范文中出現(xiàn)了常用的詞組：In spite of 雖然，take part in 參加，competitions of different levels.各種水平的比賽，prepare sb for sth“使某人做好…的準備”，好的句型有： Chris Stack, 34, a brave British man，whose health condition was so bad that he was warned three times by doctors that he would be dying, has been operated on his lung and heart.這句話用了定語從句，so…that…句型。
考點：考查提綱類書面表達