Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班學(xué)生李華，上周末你和同學(xué)到公園游覽。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“My Experience in the Park”為題，給�？�“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，介紹游園過程中發(fā)生的一件事。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：拱橋 arch bridge

My Experience in the Park

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Answer 1

【答案】My Experience in the Park

Last weekend my classmates and I went to a nearby park for relaxation.

As we entered the park, we found so many tourists enjoying the beauty of spring. Some were taking photos of colorful flowers. Some were sitting comfortably in the sun chatting. When we came to an arch bridge, we noticed a grandpa struggling to push a wheel chair onto the bridge. A grandma was sitting in it. Seeing this, my classmates and I rushed forward to give them a hand. Two of us tried hard to push the wheelchair, while another classmate walked across the bridge with the grandpa. The elderly couple were very grateful and spoke highly of us. Some tourists standing nearby also praised us with their thumbs up.

We enjoyed the natural beauty of spring today, and most importantly, we were happy that we could be of help to others.

My Experience in the Park

Last weekend, my classmates and I set off for the park to experience extraordinary scenery, which proved to be a joyful and meaningful experience.

With beams of the sunshine carpeting over the ground we stepped into the park, the vigorous sight deeply attracted us. Some tourists were taking photos of colorful flowers, appreciating and embracing the beauty of this vibrant spring. While others were sitting comfortably in the sun chatting.

However, as we were wandering near an arch bridge, a grandpa struggling to push a wheelchair onto the bridge caught out attention. A grandma was sitting in it. On seeing this, my classmate and I rushed forward and extended our helping hands with no hesitation. Two of us tried hard to drag and push the wheelchair, while another classmate steadied the grandpa, walking across the bridge. Within seconds the sweat washed over me, “but how meaningful I’m doing”, I thought.

The elderly couple and some tourists standing nearby praised us with their thumbs up, expressing their gratitude for our assistance. It was at the moment that I came to felt charm of this lovely season, not merely the energetic lives but passionate hearts.

【解析】

這是一篇圖畫類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一篇記敘文；上周末你和同學(xué)到公園游覽。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“My Experience in the Park”為題，給�？�“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，介紹游園過程中發(fā)生的一件事。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：for relaxation（放松），take photos of（拍照），arch bridge（拱橋），give a hand（幫忙）；speak highly of（表揚）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。