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問題	城市交通擁擠
解決方案（一） 建造更多道路	優(yōu)點	降低街道擁擠程度；加速車流
	缺點	占地過多
解決方案（二） 開辟更多公共汽車線路	優(yōu)點	減少自行車和汽車的數(shù)量
	缺點	對部分人可能造成不便
你的看法	（請考生聯(lián)系自己擬定內(nèi)容，列舉兩至三點．）

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參考詞匯：
1．擁堵-congestion
How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic？
With the development of economy，more and more vehicles are going on the streets．
                                                         

Answer 1

分析 考查提綱式作文：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)．這篇寫作的話題是："How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic？"要求表述不同的解決辦法和各自的優(yōu)缺點，根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當．語言力求準確、簡潔．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料．同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．
亮點句型一：To solve the problem，people have put forward many solutions，of which the following two are typical．為了解決這個問題，人們提出了許多解決方案，其中有以下兩種是典型的．這句話用了不定式做目的狀語和非限制性定語從句of which the following two are typical．
亮點句型二：For the latter，it will cause inconvenience to those who are living far away from the bus stops．對于后者，會給居住在遠離巴士站的人造成不便．這句話是限制性定語從句，先行詞是those．
亮點句型三：The best solution，in my eyes，is to combine the two：building more roads where land is less profitable and opening up more buses routes in downtown areas．在我看來，最好的解決辦法是將兩者結(jié)合起來：修建更多的道路，那里的土地利潤更低，在市中心開辟更多的公交線路． 這句話中不定式to combine the two做表語，where land is less profitable and opening up more buses routes in downtown areas．定語從句．

解答 How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic？
With the development of economy，more and more vehicles are going on the roads．As a result，most cities，especially the big ones，suffer from traffic congestion．Heavy traffic has become one of the major concerns of the society．
To solve the problem，people have put forward many solutions，of which the following two are typical．（亮點句型一）One is to lay down more roads．It will make the highways less crowded and quicken the flow of traffic．Another is to open up more bus routes．In this case，more people will take buses rather than  ride bikes or drive cars．Then the number of cars and bikes racing on the streets will decline．
However，either of the two solutions brings about problems at the same time．The former may occupy too much land，which can be otherwise more effectively used．For the latter，it will cause inconvenience to those who are living far away from the bus stops．（亮點句型二）The best solution，in my eyes is to combine the two； building more roads where land is less profitable and opening up more buses routes in downtown areas at once．（亮點句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．