假定英語課上老師要求同桌中間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：把缺詞處叫個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Brown,

 Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children．I have told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit for it．How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill closed to a river．It is such beautiful a place! We can hear birds singing happy all around．Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting．We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun．I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience．If you have interests in it, reply to me soon．

Yours, Mary

 

1.take ---- took

2.have后加 been

3.join ----joining

4.closed --- close

5.such --- so

6.happy --- happily

7.that --- which

8.visit前加to

9.去掉a

10.interests—interest

【解析】

試題分析：

1.Last summer，可知是發(fā)生在過去的事情，故用一般過去時。

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