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3．假定你是中學(xué)生李津．一個來自英國的中學(xué)生代表團(tuán)在你校舉辦英語文化節(jié)（English Culture festival）期 間來訪，并受邀觀看英文戲劇表演（English Drama Show）．請你根據(jù)以下寫作要點與要求代表學(xué)校寫一篇歡迎辭：
1）表示對客人的歡迎；
2）介紹此項活動（如活動目的、內(nèi)容、時間、地點等）
3）表達(dá)對客人的祝愿．
注意：
1）詞數(shù)：不少于100；
2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；
3）開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear British guests，
It's my great honour to express our warm welcome to you on behalf of our school．We are excited to have you here during our English Culture Festival．
As scheduled，we have English Drama Show this evening．The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in speaking and listening．Most of the plays that we will perform are by classic British authors，such as William Shakespeare and Charles Dickens．（活動介紹）（高分句型一）The show will begin at eight o'clock tonight in the school hall．Dear guests，you are welcome to take part in it．I hope we will benefit a lot from your presence．
We hope you'll have a pleasant time during your stay here．（表達(dá)祝愿）（高分句型二）

Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息一個來自英國的中學(xué)生代表團(tuán)在你校舉辦英語文化節(jié)（English Culture festival）期 間來訪，并受邀觀看英文戲劇表演（English Drama Show）．請你根據(jù)以下寫作要點與要求代表學(xué)校寫一篇歡迎辭，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：1）表示對客人的歡迎；2）介紹此項活動（如活動目的、內(nèi)容、時間、地點等）3）表達(dá)對客人的祝愿．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：
高分句型一：
Most of the plays thaty we will perform are by classic British authors，such as William Shakespeare and Charles Dickens．
高分句型二：
We hope you'll have a pleasant time during your stay here．
句型一 Most of the plays that we will perform are by classic British authors…該句中有一個由that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，that在從句中作賓語，替代前面出現(xiàn)的先行詞plays
句型二 We hope you'll have a pleasant time during your stay here．該句中hope 后面跟了一個省略了引導(dǎo)詞的賓語從句：you'll have a pleasant time during your stay here
此外，該書面表達(dá)還用了以下重要句型和高級詞匯：it is+adj+to do sth      benefit…from

解答 Dear British guests，
      It's my great honour to express our warm welcome to you on behalf of our school．We are excited to have you here during our English Culture Festival．
      As scheduled，we have English Drama Show this evening．The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in speaking and listening．Most of the plays that we will perform are by classic British authors，such as William Shakespeare and Charles Dickens．（活動介紹）（高分句型一）The show will begin at eight o'clock tonight in the school hall．Dear guests，you are welcome to take part in it．I hope we will benefit a lot from your presence．
      We hope you'll have a pleasant time during your stay here．（表達(dá)祝愿）（高分句型二）
      Thank you．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．