Question

假如你是李華。你的兩位朋友Tom與Peter幾天前發(fā)生了爭吵。3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一個禮物來緩和關(guān)系，修復友情，特地發(fā)來郵件尋求你的建議。請你根據(jù)以下要點給Tom回一封郵件：
1.禮物選擇
2.你的理由
3.其他和解建議
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右
2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫
3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)
Dear Tom,
　　　I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter.                   
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
LiHua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It’s convenient for him to get around as well.
Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that we can be good friends forever.
Best wishes,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。假如你是李華。你的兩位朋友Tom與Peter幾天前發(fā)生了爭吵。3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一個禮物來緩和關(guān)系，修復友情，特地發(fā)來郵件尋求你的建議。請你根據(jù)以下要點給Tom回一封郵件：1.禮物選擇2.你的理由3.其他和解建議。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點說明】In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship.這里含有一個定語從句；I really hope that we can be good friends forever.這里含有一個賓語從句。
考點：提綱類書面表達