Question

你們班同學(xué)打算周六去爬香山。請(qǐng)給外教Chris寫一封英文信，邀請(qǐng)他參加此次活動(dòng)。具體內(nèi)容如下：
1. 時(shí)間：8 am—5 pm；
2. 集合地點(diǎn)：校門口；
3. 交通工具：公交車；
4. 攜帶物品：雨具，午餐，相機(jī)。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于50；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Chris，
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Yours,
Joe

Answer 1

Dear Chris，
We are planning to climb the Xiangshan Hill this Saturday and sincerely invite you to go with us.
We will get together at the school gate at 8 am and probably come back at 5 pm. To make it a green travel, we will take the bus there. You’d better take your camera to record the beautiful scenery. And don’t forget to take some food, because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill. Remember, take your umbrella or raincoat in case it rains.
If you can join us, we will be very happy.
Yours,
Joe

解析試題分析：本題是一篇應(yīng)用文。作文要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，可以分段分別論述所給要點(diǎn)，注意作文的連貫性，做到流暢、自然。最好使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來寫。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用到一些常用短語had better do sth最好做某事；in case以防；To make it a green travel, we will take the bus there.這個(gè)句子中把目的狀語放在開始表示強(qiáng)調(diào)；And don’t forget to take some food, because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill用了否定的祈使句與原因狀語從句。
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