Question

假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英語演講比賽，請(qǐng)撰寫一份演講稿，內(nèi)容主要包括：
目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；
騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康、是一種低碳的生活方式，等等。
參考詞匯：低碳生活(low-carbon lifestyle)
注意：1、詞數(shù)100詞左右；
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone,
I’m Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problems then?
As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!
Thank you!

解析試題分析：本文是應(yīng)用文中常見的演講稿。話題是Let’s Ride Bicycles，有很強(qiáng)的可寫性，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來了，但只是一個(gè)提綱，考生還需要做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，讓文章更有文采。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：for one thing，What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。
同時(shí)也要注意使用一些高級(jí)的句型如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. 這句話使用的是非限制性定語從句，和現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， riding bicycles is a good solution. 這句話用了動(dòng)名詞做主語， bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas.這句話用了原因狀語從句， riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. 這句話用了it做形式主語，However, As far as I’m concerned, For one thing, For another, What’s more,
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