Question

13．第一節(jié) 短文改錯(cuò)
假段定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
    Last week，Wang Peng sees none of his customers would eat in his restaurant as usual．From his opinion，however，nothing could be better than his dishes．Out of curiosity，following one of his best friend into Yong Hui's newly opened restaurant，he was amazed at the menu there．In order to win his customers back，he went to the library．In the library he was surprised to found that his restaurant served far too many fat and Yong Hui's far too little．
    Even though his customers might get thin after eat Yong Hui's food，but they were not eating enough energy-giving food to keep fit．They would become tired very quick．
    Wang Peng felt hopeful when she drove back home．Perhaps with discount and a new sign he could win his customers back．

Answer 1

分析 上周王鵬發(fā)現(xiàn)他的餐館的顧客不如以前多了，原來是都去了新開的一家餐館，王鵬到圖書館通過查閱資料發(fā)現(xiàn)，原來他的餐館的飯菜脂肪含量比較高，但是新開的餐館盡管飯菜脂肪含量低，但是長期食用并不能給人提供足夠的能量，這就使王鵬有信心贏回他的顧客了．

解答 Last week，Wang Peng sees none of his customers would eat in his restaurant as usual．From his opinion，however，nothing could be better than his dishes．Out of curiosity，following one of his best friend into Yong Hui's newly opened restaurant，he was amazed at the menu there．In order to win his customers back，he went to the library．In the library he was surprised to found that his restaurant served far too many fat and Yong Hui's far too little．
Even though his customers might get thin after eat Yong Hui's food，but they were not eating enough energy-giving food to keep fit．They would become tired very quick．
Wang Peng felt hopeful when shedrove back home．Perhaps with∧discount and a new sign he could win his customers back．
詳解：
1．sees改為saw；考查動詞的時(shí)態(tài)，本文敘述過去的事情，要用一般過去式．
2．from改為in；考查固定搭配，in one's opinion 是固定短語，意為"在某人看來"．
3．friend改為friends；考查名詞，one of 后面要跟名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式．
4．found改為find；考查動詞不定式，不定式符號to 后面要跟動詞原形．
5．many改為much；考查近義詞辨析，many修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，much修飾不可數(shù)名詞，fat意為"脂肪"，不可數(shù)，故用much修飾．
6．eat改為eating；考查非謂語動詞，介詞after后面要跟動名詞形式．
7．去掉but；考查連詞，Even though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句時(shí)不能與but連用，故把but去掉．
8．quick改為quickly；考查副詞，此處用副詞作狀語修飾整個(gè)句子．
9．she改為he；考查人稱代詞，此處人稱代詞指代Wang Peng，結(jié)合上文可知應(yīng)該用he．
10．with后面加a；考查冠詞，discount意為"折扣"是可數(shù)的，故前面加a表示泛指．

點(diǎn)評 在短文改錯(cuò)當(dāng)中，首先要從整體掌握短文大意，結(jié)合上下文語境并充分運(yùn)用平時(shí)掌握的基礎(chǔ)知識，習(xí)慣用法，短語搭配等對短文進(jìn)行分析，以便找出文中的錯(cuò)誤加以修改．