分析 本次作文要求根據(jù)近年來,桂林開展了"綠色出行"(Green Transportation)計劃,向市民提供了大批量的公共自行車.學校將舉辦以此為主題的演講比賽,請以"Let's Ride Bicycles"為題,撰寫一篇演講稿. 要點包括:1.表明觀點:倡導"綠色出行"2.簡述倡導"綠色出行"的理由(如:環(huán)境保護,有益健康等)
故既要完成任務,又要兼顧形式的要求.
寫作亮點:本篇條理清楚,要點全面,結構連貫.其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢,也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力.例如:非謂語動詞的用法bringing great convenience to our life,riding bicycles is a good solution.with the improvement of people's living standards,environmentally friendly,be beneficial to,in response to,take the responsibility等詞匯及As is known to all,However,As far as I'm concerned,F(xiàn)or one thing,F(xiàn)or another,What's more,Therefore等連接詞.
解答 Good afternoon,everyone!
As is known to all,with the improvement of people's living standards,cars have become a popular means of transport,bringing great convenience to our life.(高分句型一 )However,they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
How can we solve the problems?As far as I'm concerned,riding bicycles is a good solution.(高分句型二)For one thing,bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving.For another,bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas.What's more,riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.(高分句型三)
Therefore,in response to the government's call----Green Transportation,let's ride bicycles!Let's take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles.Come on and join us!
Thank you!
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應,用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎方面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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