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5．假定你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華．請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給出版社的編輯寫一封信，表達(dá)你對(duì)現(xiàn)在使用的英語(yǔ)教材的看法，內(nèi)容主要包括：
優(yōu)點(diǎn)：（1）話題廣泛（如科學(xué)、文化、歷史等）．
（2）圖片豐富，有助于提高學(xué)習(xí)興趣．
（3）活動(dòng)多樣，深受學(xué)生歡迎．
建議：適當(dāng)降低詞匯難度．
注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100詞；
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾己為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Editor，
    As a student reader，I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by   your house．
These books have many advantages．One of them is that we can find a variety of topics，such as science，culture and history．（高分句型一）These topics，I think，are very popular with us students．What's more，along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures，which can help us understand English better．（高分句型二）Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject．（高分句型三）However，some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us．Therefore，I'd like to suggest changing them into easier ones．

Best regards，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇說(shuō)明自己觀點(diǎn)的寫作，要點(diǎn)已給出，首先把要點(diǎn)翻譯一下，然后用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞把它們組成篇章，也可以適當(dāng)?shù)奶砑右幌聝?nèi)容，多使用自己熟悉的句型，而且句式要有變化，用詞要準(zhǔn)確，一定要注意整篇文章的連貫和語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確，使文章讀起來(lái)不顯得單調(diào)．在寫作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯，和合適的連接詞如what's more，however，therefore等．同時(shí)可以穿插使用一些高級(jí)的句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，狀語(yǔ)從句等，可以讓文章更上一個(gè)檔次．寫完后要反復(fù)仔細(xì)的閱讀，修改一下不足之處．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be popular with受…歡迎；What's more而且；used to do過(guò)去常常；be interested in對(duì)…感興趣；However然而；Therefore因此；
One of them is that we can find a variety of topics，such as science，culture and history．（高分句型一）
What's more，along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures，which can help us understand English better．（高分句型二）
Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Editor，
       As a student reader，I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house．These books have many advantages．One of them is that we can find a variety of topics，such as science，culture and history．（高分句型一）These topics，I think，are very popular with us students．What's more，along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures，which can help us understand English better．（高分句型二）Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject．（高分句型三）However，some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us．Therefore，I'd like to suggest changing them into easier ones．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Best regards，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．