Question

假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號∧，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線＼劃掉。
修改：在錯詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
Dear Jack,
I am pleasing to hear from you and know that you had a greatly time working part-time in a fast-food restaurant. Now I would like to share your working experience with you during the past summer.
In the beginning of the summer vacation, I was hired as shopping guide in a big supermarket. I stood for ten hours a day and smiled to everyone I have met . Sometimes I was laughed at, and most of the time, I was praised for my wonderful works by many people. Half a month passed quickly after I knew it, and I learned how to deal with different people.
Above all, I have learned that smile is the key to solve any problem.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

【小題1】第一句：pleasing改成pleased
【小題2】第一句：greatly改成great
【小題3】第二句：your改成my
【小題4】第三句：In改成At
【小題5】第三句：as和shopping之間加a
【小題6】第四句：去掉have
【小題7】第五句：and改成but
【小題8】第五句：works 改成work
【小題9】第六句：after 改成before
【小題10】第七句：solve改成solving

解析試題分析：
【小題1】第一句：pleasing改成pleased. 固定結(jié)構(gòu)Be pleased to do sth.開心地做某事。故將pleasing改成pleased.
【小題2】第一句：greatly改成great. 分析語境a great time  ：一段精彩的時光。Greatly為副詞，此處應(yīng)該用形容詞詞性，故將greatly改成great.
【小題3】第二句：your改成my. 分析語境Now I would like to share your working experience with you during the past summer. 我將和你分享我的暑期工作經(jīng)歷。根據(jù)句意可知應(yīng)為“我的工作經(jīng)歷”，故將your改成my.
【小題4】第三句：In改成At. 固定結(jié)構(gòu)At the beginning of sth.：在某事的開始階段。故將In改成At.
【小題5】第三句：as和shopping之間加a. 分析語境I was hired as shopping guide in a big supermarket我被一家超市雇為一名導購。A shopping guide：一名導購。名詞前應(yīng)有冠詞修飾，此處不是特指，所以用a表示泛指。故在as和shopping之間加a.
【小題6】第四句：去掉have. 分析語境smiled to everyone I met 對我遇到的每一個人微笑。I met 為省略了關(guān)系詞的定語從句，先行詞為everyone。故去掉have.
【小題7】第五句：and改成but. 根據(jù)原文 Sometimes I was laughed at和I was praised for my wonderful works by many people有時候我會被嘲笑，大多數(shù)情況下，許多人因我出色的工作表現(xiàn)而夸獎我。可知，前后文之間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將and改成but.
【小題8】第五句：works 改成work. 根據(jù)原文I was praised for my wonderful work by many people人們因我出色的工作表現(xiàn)贊揚我。Work表示“工作”的時候為不可數(shù)名詞。故將works 改成work.
【小題9】第六句：after 改成before. 分析語境Half a month passed quickly before I knew it不知不覺半個月很快過去了。Before：在...之前。句意為“在我意識到時間流逝之前半個月過去了”。故將after 改成before.
【小題10】第七句：solve改成solving. 分析語境I have learned that smile is the key to solve any problem我意識到微笑是解決任何問題的關(guān)鍵�？芍猼o為介詞，后面應(yīng)該接名詞，故用solve的動名詞形式，故將solve改成solving.