英語課上,老師要求同桌同學(xué)相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下短文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進(jìn)行修改。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號∧，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線＼劃掉。
修改：在錯詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者從第11處不計(jì)分。
Dear Joe,
Thanks for you mail. I’m glad to know you are interested in the 2014 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses providing. Also, activities arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, so you can learn American English in authentic situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certainly add up the fun of the camp.
Join in the camp and you will have the better knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure to benefit from it.
Yours truly
Li Hua

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞作斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Tsai Qin, whose songs had a great effect on us, was on a brief tour. The next stop was Wenzhou. I looking forward to see her wonderful performance. In the morning of Mar.18^th, I set off early to the stadium. When I arrived, I found lots of fans had been gathered in the front rows to get more familiar to Tsai Qin. I held my breath, waited. At last, she turned up. The fans burst into applause. The devotion we showed to a folk queen great touched her as we seemed not to be able to control herself and moved to tears. 

請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
I am good at designing and making women’s clothes. In my childhood, I spent a lot of time on my grandmother’s home. She used to being a dressmaker, and at that time I was greatly impressed by her job. They seemed magical when a piece of clothes turned into a beautiful dress, skirt, or blouse. So in my adolescence, I begin to learn how to design women’s clothing from an extremely creative teacher. For me, designing women’s clothing is very interesting and exciting. I like the process of creation very well because I feel even if I were an artist. My the first model is my mother, she always gets a lot of praise when wearing the clothes I have made. In a word, she is very proud for me.

假定英語課上英語老師要求同桌之間互相修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在該詞下面寫出該加的詞。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞。
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。
I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder. The familiar patterns of notes attract me into the colourfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asked me to fix my attention to my homework. She does not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加: 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）, 并在其下寫出該加的詞。
刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改: 在錯的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意: 1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
As is known, that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies. Most large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24 months old. The first step is to have child get rid of the fear with water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water.

此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。 短文中有10處錯誤。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(＾)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意： 1: 每處錯誤及修改均限一詞。
2: 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Dear Editor,
I’ m writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market. After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale. Fortunately, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital. After several hours’ treatment they final escaped from death. As some illegal businessmen are only interested on making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures or care which happens to consumers. They must be charged by law. Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.

文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（^），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Sometimes you feel stressed because of frequently exams. Right? But don’t worry about the problem. Here are some suggestions on what to deal with it. First of all, you should have confidences and hold on to your dreams. It’s important to make a good study plan and carry them out. To stay healthy and energetic,you’d better doing some sports after school, such as playing basketball, swimming or running. Besides, balanced diet is helpful. You should eat more vegetables and fruit or avoid food with too much fat. It’s a good idea to turn out to your parents and teachers with help when you get into trouble. They will surely help you out. Last but not least, listening to music also makes you feel relaxing.

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤，請?jiān)谟绣e誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and devote all my spare time to practise it. But I failed to pass the mid-term examination, which made me great disappointed. So I asked my grandpa for advice when I got to home. Hearing that I told him, he said, “To some extent, examination results are sometime unexpected by your study level. You can’t judge your progress by one examination.” He encouraged myself to work hard for long time to check my results. I took my grandpa’s advice. Now I realize that the process of learning is much more important and my English is more better than before. From my experience, I feel that we should listen to opinion from old people.

以下十個句子中，每句有一處錯誤，請找出并改正。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號∧,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線/ 劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
【小題1】Don’t make any voice, Your father is sleeping
【小題2】This morning I got up very lately.
【小題3】The old man looks very health.
【小題4】You do say that you would lend me some money yesterday.
【小題5】My father asked Tom and I to help.
【小題6】You can do it this way, if you dare to do.
【小題7】Your watch is similar with mine.
【小題8】Is this the restaurant in where you work?
【小題9】Either Bob or I are to blame
【小題10】The teacher asked me not do it again.

With the popularity of the Internet, more and more people prefer to going shopping online because its advantages. Online shopping can cost us a lot of valuable time. What’s more , there are a wide variety of goods for us to choose from , which may be cheaper than that in shops. Though it is convenience to go shopping online, the problems it caused can’t be ignored. Since we can’t see the actual goods on the Internet, the quality cannot be ensured. Beside, lots of advertisement on the Internet are untrustworthy, so sometimes the customers are easily cheated.
In my opinion, we should be carefully while we are enjoyed the convenience of online shopping.