英語課上，老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下小短文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧   ），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

3．必須按答題要求做題。否則不給分。

The Mid-autumn Festival, that is one important traditional festival in China,

falls in August 15^th of the lunar calendar every year. It was celebrated both in China

and many Asian country. People believe that a full of moon is the symbol of reunion and

good luck. This is also a custom to express best wishes to their beloved ones at this

particularly time. On that day they usually go back home to have a family get-together,

so they appreciate the beautiful full moon, enjoyed the typical food—the moon cake.

All Chinese have wonderful time at the festival.

   英語課上，老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下小作文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

3．必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分。

Music is one of the arts. It is like the speaking language, but it uses sounds. Who invented music? Who sing the first song? No one knows exactly the answers of these questions. But we know that music play an important part in almost everyone’s life. Baby and young children love to hear people singing to them. When they are a little old, they like to sing the songs they have heard. When children go to the school, their world of music grows. In the middle grades students take music lessons. When they reach high school, we become interested in listening pop music. Music has meaning for everyone. It can make people happy but it can make them sad.

英語課上，老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下小短文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧  ），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
3．必須按答題要求做題。否則不給分。
The Mid-autumn Festival, that is one important traditional festival in China,
falls in August 15^th of the lunar calendar every year. It was celebrated both in China
and many Asian country. People believe that a full of moon is the symbol of reunion and
good luck. This is also a custom to express best wishes to their beloved ones at this
particularly time. On that day they usually go back home to have a family get-together,
so they appreciate the beautiful full moon, enjoyed the typical food—the moon cake.
All Chinese have wonderful time at the festival.

英語課上，老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下小短文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧  ），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
3．必須按答題要求做題。否則不給分。
I am a senior high school student. In my opinion, the classroom is place for students to gain knowledges. So quietness is badly need for us to learn in the classroom. But recently some students have brought their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear of the ring of mobile phones. Some of them even wasted precious time in class type short messages on the mobile phones. To keep the classroom quietly and make us focus more on their studies, I suggest that mobile phones shouldn’t be used in the classroom. At least, they should be used where we are having a class.

英語課上，老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下作文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。共有10處錯誤，每句最多兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
3 必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the
street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young
man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell
off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t
know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached.
They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote
something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.

英語課上，老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下作文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。共有10處錯誤，每句最多兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
3 必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分。
Dear Tom,
It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like tell you something which took place in my school yesterday.
In the afternoon we hold a grown –up ceremony for our coming 18 years old birthday. First we made an oath that as grown-up we should have a sense of duty for our social from now on. Then we showed our thanks for to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patient. And our teachers also gave us cards expressed their good wishes to them. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing or dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will never forget the day in my life.
Yours,
Li Hua

英語課上，老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下作文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。共有10處錯誤，每句最多兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
3. 必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分。
My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There is a time when I swam like a rock.
This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of me at a nearby pond. I slipped
into it. Had my friends not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then,
I have come to know importance of learning to swim. I didn’t attend any training class
and learned it all by myself. I have no difficult swimming at all now. Though the way I swim look
awkward (笨拙的), at least it can keep me from floating. Thinking of this, I feel quite satisfying.

英語課上，老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下便條為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。便條中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Dear Jim,
Thank you for your last letter telling me your recently news. I'd like to tell you something about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct.20, which was a fine day. There were over 1,600 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finishes the race in 11.2 seconds and broke down the school record. They were all very excited. The sports meet was great success. It was why we were all making every effort for our class honor. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud in what we had done. Looking forward to receiving your letter.
Yours,
Li Ping

英語課上，老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下小短文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧  ），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
3．必須按答題要求做題。否則不給分。
Dear Smith，
I’m an university student. I once think life at the university must be excellent, and now I have changed my mind . I had three roommate, and I was the last one to move in the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they have become colder towards me than ago. Many times, I wanted to talk with them about how I felt, but I failed to find an opening. I have been feeling sad and lonely. Although I am an honest student, but I can’t win true friendship.
Yours sincerely,
Tom

英語課上，老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下便條為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。便條中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
It is reported, some needy students receive financial support of some kind people but never  express our thanks．Personally, I think they are wrong．
Though the helpers didn’t expect any reward in return,  but it’s necessary and good manner to say “thank you”．Besides, it is a basic social skill express ourselves in modern society．Maybe some of them do feel thankfully．It is only because they are afraid of being looked down upon which they remain silent．But I just want to say that being poor for a moment doesn’t mean you will be poor forever．