Question

6．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的高一學(xué)生李華，請閱讀以下一位美國學(xué)生的來信并對其進行回復(fù)．
Dear Li Hua，
My name is Martha．I'm 16years old and I live in New York．I'm in tenth grade in Senior High school．My favorite subjects are history and Spanish．I'm also studying Chinese in evening class．
I'm writing to teenagers all over the world．I have some questions about your first year at Senior High school．Would you mind answering the questions for me？
•What is your first impression of your Senior High school？
•What is your impression of your English teacher？
•What is your English class like？
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Martha
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100-120；
2．信件的格式已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
3．文中不得透露有關(guān)你個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．
Dear Martha，
                                                       
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In order to improve my interest and ablity，I watch many American films in my spare time．
高分句型二：
The first activity which I took part in was playing balls．
句型一 In order to improve my interest and ablity 該部分使用了固定短語 in order to do sth為了做某事，位于句首，用作目的狀語
句型二  activity which I took part in 該句是一個由which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，which在從句中作動詞短語take part in 的賓語，which替代先行詞activity
此外，該文章中還有以下重要短語和詞匯：
take part in 參加    keep in touch 保持聯(lián)系  hang out 外出
重要句型和重點短語的結(jié)合使用，使得文章表達更有層次，表達更為準確

解答 Dear Martha，
     I'm so glad to receive your mail．My name is Emma and I'm also a teeneger girl in the Senior High school．I have study English since I was 10 years old and I like it very much．In order to improve my interest and ablity，I watch many American films in my spare time．（高分句型一）
     My memory of school was the big lawn in my school．It's really big enough for our young students to play in there，We run and sing，F(xiàn)ortunely we sometimes catch some insects which hided in the grass．It's a wonderful free memory and I never forget that happy days．The first activity which I took part in was playing balls．（高分句型二）Our class hold a competition and we dribble balls to see who can dribble the most in one minute．（對學(xué)校的印象）
     My first teacher is Mrs，Chen．She is a very kind lady and told us many funny stories．She was always patient for our strange questions．My first best friend is Lisa，we knew each other since I came to primary school．We can share everthing including some secrets．We are not go to the same Senior High school now but we keep in touch by telephone．And we like hanging out together in weekends or holidays．（英語課堂和英語老師介紹）
                                                                                                                                         Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點評 該書面表達為讀寫任務(wù)型作文，該篇作文規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．