Question

18．該題要求改正所給短文中的10處錯(cuò)誤．如有錯(cuò)誤，則按下列情況改正：
刪除：該行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（﹨）劃掉．
增加：該行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（Λ），并在該符號(hào)下寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
修改：該行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞；在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出改正后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改僅限一詞；
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．（題在答題卡上）
I'm glad to know that you spent the spring festival in china．As you know，happy enjoying food during the spring festival was one of our customs．The custom has been passed since a long time before．Just as you say，some people don't realize food waste，but they don't care at all when they can't finish the food on their plates．They even throw it away if you don't like the taste．However，not all people have a habit of wasting food．The good news is how people are already beginning to take actions．Most people have been developed the habit of eating up the food on the plate．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要講述春節(jié)期間食物浪費(fèi)很?chē)?yán)重．一些人根本不關(guān)心食物浪費(fèi)，只要味道不好，就將食物扔掉．但大多數(shù)人養(yǎng)成了吃光盤(pán)子里食物的習(xí)慣．

解答 I'm glad to know that you spent the spring festival in china．As you know，happy enjoying food during the spring festival was one of our customs．The custom has been passed∧since a long time before．Just as you say，some people don't realize food waste，but they don't care at all when they can't finish the food on their plates．They even throw it away if you don't like the taste．However，not all people have a habit of wasting food．The good news is how people are already beginning to take actions．Most people have been developed the habit of eating up the food on the plate．
詳解：
1．happy改為happily 考查副詞．enjoy是動(dòng)詞，要用副詞修飾．
2．was改為is 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．此處講述的是一般事實(shí)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
3．加down 考查詞語(yǔ)用法．pass down意為"pass down"，是固定搭配．
4．before改為ago 考查副詞．before是站在過(guò)去看過(guò)去，多和過(guò)去完成時(shí)連用，ago是站在現(xiàn)在看過(guò)去，多和一般過(guò)去時(shí)連用．
5．but改為and 考查連詞．前后兩句表示并列關(guān)系，而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，用連詞and．
6．you改為they 考查代詞．根據(jù)句意：如果他們不喜歡這種味道，他們甚至扔掉食物．用代詞they．
7．a(chǎn)改為the 考查冠詞．habit后有介詞短語(yǔ)of wasting food作后置定語(yǔ)，用the表示特指．
8．how改為that 考查連詞．表語(yǔ)從句people are already beginning to take action是完整的，用連詞that．
9．a(chǎn)ctions改為action 考查固定搭配．take action意為"采取行動(dòng)，行動(dòng)起來(lái)"，是固定搭配．
10．去掉been 考查動(dòng)詞語(yǔ)態(tài)．根據(jù)句意：大多數(shù)人養(yǎng)成了吃光盤(pán)子里食物的習(xí)慣．用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，been是多余的，要去掉．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說(shuō)明文，短文故事，書(shū)信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類(lèi)似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語(yǔ)篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺(jué)是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．