12．I was surprising to receive your letter a few days ago．Since I came to the new school，I had planned to write to you．Therefore，the busy life of the school spared me no time．After came to the school，I made up of my mind to study hard．To tell the truth，that was Miss White，my new English teacher，who changed my mind．She suggested that I give in my bad habits．Although  he is very strict with us，all the students fond of her．
I have to stop here，I am looking forward to hear from you soon．

分析 這是一封書(shū)信，作者向朋友介紹了自己在新學(xué)校的情況以及自己的英語(yǔ)老師．

解答 I was surprising to receive your letter a few days ago．Since I came to the new school，I had planned to write to you．Therefore，the busy life of the school spared me no time．After came to the school，I made up of my mind to study hard．To tell the truth，that was Miss White，my new English teacher，who changed my mind．She suggested that I give inmy bad habits．Although  he is very strict with us，all the students∧fond of her．
I have to stop here，I am looking forward to hear from you soon．
詳解：
1．surprising改為surprised；分詞錯(cuò)誤．句子surprise作系動(dòng)詞的表語(yǔ)，且表達(dá)主語(yǔ)I的感受，要用過(guò)去分詞來(lái)構(gòu)成；現(xiàn)在分詞表達(dá)事物的特征．
2．had改為have；時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤．句子since連接的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，表示從過(guò)去到現(xiàn)在的時(shí)間，是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)的用法．
3．Therefore改為However；副詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是轉(zhuǎn)折，且句中有逗號(hào)分隔，要用表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的副詞however來(lái)構(gòu)成．
4．came改為coming或在came前加I；動(dòng)名詞錯(cuò)誤．句中after為介詞，后接名詞或動(dòng)名詞；也可以在came前加I，構(gòu)成after連接的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
5．of去掉；動(dòng)詞搭配錯(cuò)誤．make up one's mind下決心，固定短語(yǔ)．
6．that改為it；代詞錯(cuò)誤．it was…who…構(gòu)成強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，對(duì)主語(yǔ)Miss White進(jìn)行強(qiáng)調(diào)．
7．in改為up；動(dòng)詞搭配錯(cuò)誤．give up放棄；give in讓步，屈服．
8．he改為she；邏輯指代錯(cuò)誤．句意指代的是前面的Miss White，要用she來(lái)指代．
9．加are；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．be fond of喜歡，固定短語(yǔ)．
10．hear改為hearing；動(dòng)名詞錯(cuò)誤．句中to是介詞，后接名詞或動(dòng)名詞．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹R(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．

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D．when we should especially wash our hands with soap
52．In which part of newspaper would you most probably read this passage？C
A．Medical care     B．Public service       C．Health report     D．Advertisement．

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