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4．假定你是李華，你原本和Peter約好一起去觀看一場足球比賽，但是昨天下午你突然接到母親的電話說她要來看你，結(jié)果你沒能按時赴約．為此你感到十分抱歉．請根據(jù)以下要點給Peter寫一封信，以表歉意．主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．表達(dá)歉意； 2．解釋沒能去的原因； 3．希望下周三邀請Peter吃飯作為補(bǔ)償．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計人總詞數(shù)．
Dear Peter，
I suppose you may be a little unhappy because of me as you were expecting me to come in any circumstance．（高分句型一）I am extremely sorry for not going to watch the football game together with you yesterday afternoon．Please accept my sincere apology．Yesterday afternoon I was going to leave the dormitory when I received my mother's call telling me she would come for a visit．（高分句型二）You know I hadn't seen her for a couple of months and I did miss her．So I had to cancel the appointment with you．
In order to make up for it，let's meet at Doe's Café at noon next Wednesday．（高分句型三）It will be my treat．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours'
LiHua

Answer 1

分析 根據(jù)內(nèi)容要求我們先總述事情，即沒能和他一起去看球賽，然后再根據(jù)提示依次來寫．首先表達(dá)歉意時我們常用：I am sorry for…；accept my sincere apology等．
然后再詳細(xì)介紹沒去的原因：昨天下午突然接到母親的電話說她要來 received my mother's call，she would come for a visit，hadn't seen her for a couple of months and I did miss her等．最后提出下周三請客作為補(bǔ)償，可以用In order to make up for it，be my treat等．最后在寫信件結(jié)尾-盼著你的回信I'm looking forward to your reply．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：I suppose you may be a little unhappy because of me as you were expecting me to come in any circumstance．（高分句型一）
Yesterday afternoon I was going to leave the dormitory when I received my mother's call telling me she would come for a visit．（高分句型二
  In order to make up for it，let's meet at Doe's Café at noon next Wednesday．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      I suppose you may be a little unhappy because of me as you were expecting me to come in any circumstance．（高分句型一）I am extremely sorry for not going to watch the football game together with you yesterday afternoon．Please accept my sincere apology．Yesterday afternoon I was going to leave the dormitory when I received my mother's call telling me she would come for a visit．（高分句型二）You know I hadn't seen her for a couple of months and I did miss her．So I had to cancel the appointment with you．
     In order to make up for it，let's meet at Doe's Café at noon next Wednesday．（高分句型三）It will be my treat．
     I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．