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16．假設(shè)你是李華，周末準備做一名兼職英語導游，父母擔心會影響你的學業(yè)而不同意你的看法．你的英國朋友Jeff是一名兼職導游，請你根據(jù)以下要點給Jeff寫一封信．
（1）表明寫信目的；
（2）談?wù)勛约旱膯栴}及想法；
（3）希望得到Jeff的幫助．
注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jeff，
How are you doing？I'm writing to you for some advice．I read a part-time job advertisement for an English tour guide in the newspaper．I think it's a good chance for me to practice my English and gain some working experience．（高分句型一）I told my parents about my plan，but they didn't agree with my idea．They thought the work would take up much of my time．（高分句型二）You also work as a part-time guide．Do you feel it tiring to work and study at the same time？Is it worth doing the two things and how do you balance them？（高分句型三）
I am looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息周末準備做一名兼職英語導游，父母擔心會影響你的學業(yè)而不同意你的看法．你的英國朋友Jeff是一名兼職導游，請你根據(jù)以下要點給Jeff寫一封信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：（1）表明寫信目的；（2）談?wù)勛约旱膯栴}及想法；（3）希望得到Jeff的幫助．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：agree with同意；take up 占據(jù)；at the same time同時；be worth doing值得做；
I think it's a good chance for me to practice my English and gain some working experience．（高分句型一）
They thought the work would take up much of my time．（高分句型二）
Is it worth doing the two things and how do you balance them？（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jeff，
        How are you doing？I'm writing to you for some advice． I read a part-time job advertisement for an English tour guide in the newspaper．I think it's a good chance for me to practice my English and gain some working experience．（高分句型一）I told my parents about my plan，but they didn't agree with my idea．They thought the work would take up much of my time．（高分句型二）You also work as a part-time guide．Do you feel it tiring to work and study at the same time？Is it worth doing the two things and how do you balance them？（高分句型三）
        I am looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．