Question

假如你是李華，現(xiàn)在高中二年級學習。請你根據(jù)表格內容，以The Highlight of My Senior High School Life為題，用英語寫一篇短文，簡要介紹你的高中生活。

師生關系	談談師生關系
課程學習	介紹你在校的學習情況
課外活動	介紹你的課外活動
自己的感受	……

說明：1.短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2.在內容要求的基礎上可適當發(fā)揮，以使短文意思通順、連貫。
3.詞數(shù)120～150.
The Highlight of My Senior High School Life
I’m Li Hua. Now I’m studying in senior 2 and experiencing an unforgettable and tense life.
                                                                                      
                                                                               

Answer 1

The Highlight of My Senior High School Life
I’m Li Hua. Now I’m studying in senior 2 and experiencing an unforgettable and tense life. As a student of Senior 2. I’m working hard to realize my dream.
In the class, I listen attentively and sometimes I discuss problems with my classmates. In self-study courses, I do a lot of homework or papers. But we have colorful out-of-class activities to relax ourselves after a day’s hard working. I like table tennis and I’m on our school table tennis. Besides, I like swimming very much, which I think is great to my health.
I’m glad that the relationship between our teachers and us students is very good. We often discuss problems and play together. I’d like to say I have learned a lot from my teachers both in books and in life.
Although sometimes studying is tiring, I feel very happy and this experience will be kept in my mind forever.

解析試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要應用虛擬語氣，所以在寫作時，要尤其注意虛擬語氣的表達方式。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】范文中出現(xiàn)一些常見短語realize my dream 實現(xiàn)我的夢想；relax ourselves放松自己； learned a lot from 從當中學會。。；kept in my mind把。。記在心里。 Besides, I like swimming very much, which I think is great to my health.這個句子運用which引導的非限制性定語從句。I’d like to say I have learned a lot from my teachers both in books and in life這個句子中l(wèi)earn后面跟著一個賓語從句，不缺成分，由that來引導可省略。Although sometimes studying is tiring, I feel very happy and this experience will be kept in my mind forever這個句子中運用although引導讓步狀語從句。
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