Question

眾所周知， 環(huán)境與我們每個人息息相關(guān)。而隨著社會的發(fā)展，環(huán)境污染卻越來越嚴(yán)重。請根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示，以“How to Protect the Environment” 為題，用英文寫一篇120--150字的短文。
現(xiàn)狀： 全球氣候變暖，極端氣候頻發(fā)；空氣、水污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾隨處可見。
治理措施：1）提高人們的環(huán)保意識（awareness）。
2）制定環(huán)保法律，違者嚴(yán)懲。
3）你的建議：（至少兩條）
要求：1. 短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，再進行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2. 書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔（卷面分1--3分）。
How to Protect the Environment
                                                                                   
                                                                             

Answer 1

How to Protect the Environment
As we all know, the environment is closely connected with our life. However, with the development of our society, environment pollution is becoming more and more serious. We can see waste thrown everywhere and we have to breathe in polluted air and drink polluted water . What’ more, because of pollution, global warming increases and extreme weather happens frequently. All this has a bad effect on our life and health. So it’s high time we took effective measures to protect the environment.
Firstly, we mast raise people’s awareness of environment protection and educate people not to throw rubbish everywhere. Secondly, the government should make laws about protecting environment and punish those breaking the law severely. In addition, I think we can plant more trees, grass and flowers to refresh the air around us. We should also save resources and avoid wasting.
All in all, let’s join together to protect our environment.

解析試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達.寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果
【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語As we all know 眾所周知；What’ more 而且；has a bad effect on對。。有壞的影響； In addition 此外；All in all總而言之。So it’s high time we took effective measures to protect the environment.這個句子中考查it is high time that 一般過去時或should do，其中should不可省略，典型的虛擬語氣。Firstly, we mast raise people’s awareness of environment protection and educate people not to throw rubbish everywhere.這個句子中raise one’s awareness,提到。。意識，not to do 不要做某事，表達目的。
考點： 提綱類作文