Question

假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英語演講比賽。請(qǐng)撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題。
2.騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等。
注意：1.詞數(shù)：120詞左右；
2. 演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，該部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Good morning, everyone,!
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Thank you!

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone,
I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.  The topic of my speech today is “Let's Ride Bicycles”. As we know, air pollution and heavy traffic are becoming increasingly severe due to the overuse of cars. Therefore, it’s high time we chose another means of transport－cycling.
Compared to cars, bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain, and we don't have all the added costs of fuel and parking. What's more, bicycles are more environmentally friendly than cars and cycling is a good way of energy-saving and low-carbon life. Last but not least, cycling is can help keep fit and live longer. By riding bicycles, you can cut down your risk of heart attacks, high blood pressure and other illnesses. So, let's ride bicycles from today on!
Thank you

解析試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求寫一篇題為L(zhǎng)et’s Ride Bicycles的演講稿。根據(jù)提示的要點(diǎn)，文章可以一段寫目前汽車造成的問題，一段寫騎自行車的好處，這樣的段落安排會(huì)使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。此外要點(diǎn)中列舉騎自行車的好處較多，所以在寫這部分時(shí)要注意使用表順序的連接詞，以使文章有條理性。另外，在語言的運(yùn)用上可以適當(dāng)使用祈使句，這樣使演講稿更具有號(hào)召性。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇范文語言簡(jiǎn)練流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點(diǎn)全面。As we know, air pollution and heavy traffic are becoming increasingly severe due to the overuse of cars.這句話用了非限制性定語從句 Therefore, it’s high time we chose another means of transport－cycling.這句話用了虛擬語氣，Compared to cars, bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain, and we don't have all the added costs of fuel and parking. 這句話用了過去分詞做狀語，此外，文中Last but not least,,和 What’s more,的使用使文章內(nèi)容條理分明，層次清晰。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。