Question

假如你是小華, Jane是美國人。在她暑假來中國游玩時你們相識,并成為好朋友。Jane回國后,你很想念她,于是給她寫了一封信,并且和她談了你對高一新生活的感受，信頭信尾均已給出。要求120詞左右。
內(nèi)容包括：
1.新學校的生活、學習情況與感受。
2.表達對她父母的問候，并請她明年來你校看看的愿望。
Dear Jane,
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Yours sincerely,
Xiaohua

Answer 1

Dear Jane, 
How’s everything going? I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. I miss you very much after you left China and thus I am writing this letter to tell you something about me. I entered senior high school in September. The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. I have decided to try my best to learn a lot from them. Of course, I will also do more exercise to keep fit.
Give my best regards to your parents and I am looking forward to your visiting my school next year.
Yours sincerely,
Xiaohua

解析試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。要求給Jane寫一封信,并且和她談了你對高一新生活的感受。內(nèi)容包括： 1.新學校的生活、學習情況與感受。2.表達對她父母的問候，并請她明年來你校看看的愿望。
要點都已經(jīng)給出，審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。書信類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。還要用適當?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
【亮點說明】范文語言簡潔，要點全面， 詞組有：keep fit.保持健康，do more exercise多鍛煉， Give my best regards to代某人向…問好， look forward to 盼望，句式多變：I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. 這句話用不定式， The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges.這句話用了賓語從句。
考點：考查書信類書面表達