Question

假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)撰寫(xiě)一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1.目前汽車(chē)帶來(lái)的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問(wèn)題;
2.騎自行車(chē)的益處，如能環(huán)保有利健康等。
注意：1.詞數(shù)：120詞左右；
2.演講稿開(kāi)頭已給出，且該部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：低碳生活（low-carbon life）節(jié)能(energy saving)
Good morning, everyone,
I am Li hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone,
I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride Bicycles"．
As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy – saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.
Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!
Thank you!

解析試題分析：本文是應(yīng)用文中常見(jiàn)的演講稿。話題是號(hào)召同學(xué)多騎自行車(chē).有很強(qiáng)的可寫(xiě)性，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，但只是一個(gè)提綱，考生還需要做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文開(kāi)頭緊扣題目，起到了開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題的作用。As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句和現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)， As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy – saving. bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. 這句話用了動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)。文章中上下文的銜接句成了本范文的一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)，F(xiàn)or one thing, For another, What's more, L等的使用使文章渾然一體。
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