Question

假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)高三(1)班學(xué)生李華。下面是你校布告欄里張貼的“征集接待家庭”的通知，請(qǐng)根據(jù)其內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信。詞數(shù)不少于100。
注意：信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。

Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Three._______________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One , Senior Three. I’m writing in reply to the notice for host families. I think I have several reasons to accommodate one foreign friend. First , I believe my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners .Also , my good communication skills enable me to keep a good relationship with others .As for accommodation , my family live in a 4-room apartment and there is always a spare room for the guest. In addition , my home is very convenient in transportation . Its location makes it easy to take either subways or buses to most places. I have also got support from my parents , who said yes without hesitation when informed of my wish .
I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account .
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是要求學(xué)生就學(xué)校布告欄里張貼的“征集接待家庭”的通知寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信，其實(shí)就是要求學(xué)生說(shuō)出自己家能夠做為接待家庭的理由。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意申請(qǐng)信的書(shū)寫(xiě)格式，文章的時(shí)態(tài)，因?yàn)槭墙榻B自己和自己家的情況所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，當(dāng)然也必須用第一人稱(chēng)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意要點(diǎn)要全面，但是不要根據(jù)材料逐字翻譯，應(yīng)該注意細(xì)節(jié)的補(bǔ)充以及文章結(jié)構(gòu)上的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章要點(diǎn)全面，內(nèi)容緊湊。尤其是 first, also, as for ,in addition 等詞的使用不僅把全部要點(diǎn)連貫起來(lái),而且使文章脈絡(luò)分明,條理更加清楚; 此外,文中固定句式 I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account 以及并列句my family live in a 4-room apartment and there is always a spare room for the guest和定語(yǔ)從句I have also got support from my parents , who said yes without hesitation when informed of mywish等多種句式的運(yùn)用不但使文章避免了單調(diào),而且也給文章錦上添花.
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