10.你的英國(guó)筆友Johnson下個(gè)學(xué)期要來(lái)你校交流學(xué)習(xí),請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封100字左右的etmail,介紹你學(xué)校的基本情況,內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包含下列幾個(gè)方面:課程安排,作息時(shí)間,食堂就餐,社團(tuán)活動(dòng).開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好.
Dear Johnson,
So nice to hear that you are coming next semester.                                                      

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息 你的英國(guó)筆友Johnson下個(gè)學(xué)期要來(lái)你校交流學(xué)習(xí),請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封100字左右的etmail,介紹你學(xué)校的基本情況.寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):課程安排,作息時(shí)間,食堂就餐,社團(tuán)活動(dòng)    2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):be eager to渴望去做;Actually事實(shí)上;the same as 和…一樣;Approximately 大約;
Actually the curriculum is much the same as that in UK,namely Chinese,math,chemistry,physics,PE,biology,and of course,English.(高分句型一)
Morning lessons start at 7:40,with each lasting 40 minutes.Lunch is usually served at 12 at the school canteen,after which you will have a break for about an hour,and then take afternoon lessons at 1:40 p.m.(高分句型二)
Approximately 50 clubs of all sorts are thriving in this school,ranging from hiking,bicycling,football,basketball to music,debating,and theater.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Johnson,
      So nice to hear that you are coming next semester.You must be eager to know what it is like to study here.Actually the curriculum is much the same as that in UK,namely Chinese,math,chemistry,physics,PE,biology,and of course,English.(高分句型一)Morning lessons start at 7:40,with each lasting 40 minutes.Lunch is usually served at 12 at the school canteen,after which you will have a break for about an hour,and then take afternoon lessons at 1:40 p.m.(高分句型二)Approximately 50 clubs of all sorts are thriving in this school,ranging from hiking,bicycling,football,basketball to music,debating,and theater.(高分句型三)You will certainly find your stay here enjoyable.
      Hope to see you soon.
                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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