Question

每個(gè)人都有感到特別沮喪的時(shí)候，但是我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)克服這種情緒，振作精神。請(qǐng)以 "How I Overcame Depression”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100-120個(gè)詞的短文，短文內(nèi)容包括：
1. 描述一件使你感到特別沮喪的事情；
2. 說(shuō)明你是如何克服沮喪以及你的感受。
注意：文章的標(biāo)題已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。
How I Overcame Depression
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           

Answer 1

How I Overcame Depression
The final exam of last term was drawing near. Knowing what it meant for a Senior Three student, I buried myself in study. So many nights found me burning the midnight oil. I thought I was well prepared. Sometimes, however, hard work was just not enough. It couldn’t be more depressing when I stared at my low rank, my mind going blank. But my pride didn’t allow me to appear weak. So I stayed locked away, refusing to talk to anyone.
Fortunately, it wasn’t long before I realized what I was doing was actually hurting those who care about me and doing myself no good. So I went to seek help from my parents. With them motivating me, my depression faded away. Now I have the confidence to win the battle in my Senior Three and brave any difficulty in my life.

解析試題分析：題目要求以“How I Overcame Depression”為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹自己是如何克服悲觀情緒的。詞數(shù)在100-120之間。作文可以分兩部分，第一部分描述一件令人沮喪的事情；第二部分介紹克服沮喪的過(guò)程和自己的感受。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了draw near，buried myself in，stared at，faded away等短語(yǔ)，使作文內(nèi)容比較充實(shí)；
范文使用了較多的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)：非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞Knowing what it meant for a Senior Three student，refusing to talk to anyone；with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)With them motivating me；主語(yǔ)從句what I was doing；定語(yǔ)從句who care about me等，語(yǔ)法知識(shí)掌握、運(yùn)用的較為熟練；
范文還注意使用However, Fortunately等來(lái)銜接上下文，使作文顯得比較緊湊，連接緊密。
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