5.隨著現(xiàn)代社會(huì)的飛速發(fā)展,越來越多的人喜歡網(wǎng)上購物(shopping online).請你根據(jù)表格提示的信息點(diǎn),以"The advangtages and disadvantages of online shopping"為題,寫一篇短文,說明網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn),并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn).
1.語言連貫,句式規(guī)范,字跡工整.
2.100--120詞左右.
3.要點(diǎn)齊全.
4.參考詞匯  1.商品 goods  2.退貨 return the goods
優(yōu)點(diǎn)缺點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)
1.不出門就可以逛商店
2.買到當(dāng)?shù)貨]有的商品
3.價(jià)格低
1.有時(shí)實(shí)物和圖片相差很大
2.衣服不能試穿
3.退貨不方便
 

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文,根據(jù)提示信息以"The advangtages and disadvantages of online shopping"為題,寫一篇短文,寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):分別從網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)、缺點(diǎn)及自己的觀點(diǎn)三個(gè)方面來討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架,要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):it is convenient to do sth做…是非常方便的;besides另外;however然而;in my opinion以我的觀點(diǎn)來看;People who like it say it is more convenient to online shopping.(高分句型一)
 Second,the Intent can help people get the goods not available in the place where they live.(高分句型二)
In my opinion,though online shopping has weaknesses,it will replace traditional shopping soon.(高分句型三)

解答 The advantages and disadvantages of online shopping
    Nowadays,online shopping has become increasingly popular.
    People who like it say it is more convenient to online shopping.(高分句型一)First,people can shop without leaving their home.Second,the Intent can help people get the goods not available in the place where they live.(高分句型二) Besides,online prices are usually lower.(網(wǎng)購優(yōu)點(diǎn))
    However,some people have opposite opinions.First,the goods people get sometimes differ a lot from the pictures on the Intent.Second,people can't try on the clothes.In addition,the goods can't be exchanged easily.(網(wǎng)購缺點(diǎn))
    In my opinion,though online shopping has weaknesses,it will replace traditional shopping soon.(高分句型三)(自己觀點(diǎn))

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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