Question

下面短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分
Lin Qiaozhi, lived from 1901 to 1983, was a specialist in women’s diseases. She lived in a generation that girls’ education was second to boys’. It was hard work and determination which got her into medical school. What made her success later on was the kindness and consideration she showed to her patients. There is story after story of how she, tiring after a day’s work, went late at night to deliver a baby for a poor family who could not pay for her. She was said to have devoted her whole life to her patients and safe delivered about 50,000 babies. She also wrote a book intended for woman in the countryside, explaining how to cut the death rate from having or caring for babies.

Answer 1

【小題1】lived→living
【小題2】that→when
【小題3】which→that
【小題4】success→successful 或 succeed或∧a
【小題5】is→was
【小題6】tiring→tired
【小題7】去掉for
【小題8】safe→safely
【小題9】woman→women
【小題10】or→and

解析試題分析：林巧稚是研究婦女疾病的專家。她生活在一個(gè)女孩子的教育不受重視的時(shí)代。是她的努力和決心使她考入了醫(yī)學(xué)院。而后來(lái)讓她成功的是她對(duì)病人所表現(xiàn)出來(lái)的體貼周到和她的善良。她把自己的一生都奉獻(xiàn)給了病人，她成功接生的嬰兒多達(dá)50000多名。
【小題1】考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。Lin Qiaozhi, lived from 1901 to 1983, was a specialist s根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知此處live是做狀語(yǔ)，和句子主語(yǔ)Lin Qiaozhi構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以用現(xiàn)在分詞。把lived改為L(zhǎng)iving
【小題2】考查定語(yǔ)從句。She lived in a generation that girls’ education was second to boys’Generation后的定語(yǔ)從句意思完整，不缺少成分，所以判斷用關(guān)系副詞，而generation表示時(shí)間，所以把that改為when。
【小題3】考查強(qiáng)調(diào)句型。It was hard work and determination which got her into medical school.根據(jù)句意可知此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，強(qiáng)調(diào)句型構(gòu)成“it was/is…..that ”，所以把which改為that。 
【小題4】考查短語(yǔ)。What made her success later on. 在“Make +賓語(yǔ)+賓補(bǔ)”結(jié)構(gòu)中，補(bǔ)語(yǔ)應(yīng)該是動(dòng)詞原形、形容詞或者名詞，而此處success指“成功的人或成功的事”，所以可以把success改為successful 或 succeed或前面加a。
【小題5】考查時(shí)態(tài)。There is story after story。整篇文章講述過(guò)去的事情，要用過(guò)去時(shí)，所以把is 改為was。
【小題6】考查形容詞。tiring after a day’s work。tiring“令人疲倦的”，tired“感到勞累的，厭倦的” 而 此處指的是盡管林巧稚身體疲勞，但仍去幫助別人，所以把tiring改為tired。
【小題7】考查介詞。who could not pay for her。Pay for sth “付款 ”，而此處指支付某人費(fèi)用，所以用pay sb，把for 去掉。
【小題8】考查副詞用法。and safe delivered about 50,000 babies.修飾動(dòng)詞deliver應(yīng)該用副詞，所以把safe改為safely。
【小題9】考查名詞。She also wrote a book intended for woman。此處泛指鄉(xiāng)村的婦女們，要用復(fù)數(shù)名詞,所以把woman改為women。
【小題10】考查連詞。from having or caring for babies。根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容可知此處是并列關(guān)系而不是選擇關(guān)系，所以把or改為and。
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。