假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處浯言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及—個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
My neighbor Jackie is always consideration to others. One day , I was going to deliver a speech at an institute while I found my car wouldn’t get started. I rushed to the street to hire a taxi. Just at that time I come across Jackie. He was hurried going to attend his sick mother in hospital.
Furthermore, when he learned about my problems, he didn’t hesitate to give me a lift. I arrived at the lecture hall in time, when the audience had been present . I owe my great thanks to my neighbour Jackie , he is a person ready to help the others at any time.


【小題1】consideration改成considerate
【小題2】While改成when
【小題3】 come改成came
【小題4】hurried改成hurriedly
【小題5】attend后面加to
【小題6】Furthermore改成however
【小題7】problems改成problem
【小題8】when改成where
【小題9】he改成who
【小題10】去掉the

解析試題分析：文章介紹作者的鄰居Jackie總是樂于助人，作者通過自己的親身經(jīng)歷說明Jackie總是為別人著想，作者也很感激他。
【小題1】我的鄰居Jackie總是對別人考慮周到的。Be considerate to sb“對…考慮周到”
【小題2】一天我要到一個機構(gòu)做演講，這時我發(fā)現(xiàn)我的車啟動不了了。While表示時間是時間段，when表示時間點，這里是“這時”
【小題3】就在這時我遇到Jackie，這里描述的是過去的事情，用一般過去式： come改成came
【小題4】他匆忙去醫(yī)院照顧媽媽。修飾go用副詞hurriedly
【小題5】考查詞組：attend to照顧
【小題6】然而當他聽了我的問題，他毫不猶豫的讓我搭便車。表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系用however
【小題7】作者的問題就是汽車啟動不了，用單數(shù)就可以。problems改成problem
【小題8】我及時趕到演講大廳，那里觀眾已經(jīng)在等著了。先行詞是hall，定語從句缺少地點狀語，用where引導(dǎo)定語從句。
【小題9】我要感謝我的鄰居Jackie，他是個樂于助人的人。這是非限制性定語從句，用 who引導(dǎo)
【小題10】他任何時候都樂于幫助別人。這里的others是泛指，去掉the
考點：考查短文改錯

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