4．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及二個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
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修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：（1）每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
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I was really sad while I found my bicycle went wrong again．Tired of repairing it again and again，I decided buy a new one．After school，I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack．The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store．It looked very cool that I could hardly wait to ride ft．The shopkeeper told us that it was the latest style．He wanted to charge me for 800yuan，that was too high for me．I just couldn't afford such an expensive one．Then I choose another one，which cost him only 200yuan．It was not perfect，so it was much better than the old one．

分析 本文主要講述作者厭煩總是修理自行車．當(dāng)自行車又壞了的時(shí)候，便決定買一輛新車．作者和同學(xué)一到達(dá)商店便喜歡上一輛黑色的自行車，但要800元，作者覺得太貴了，最后，僅花了200元買了一輛，作者認(rèn)為雖不完美，但比舊車要好．

解答 I was really sad while I found my bicycle went wrong again．Tired of repairing it again and again，I decided∧buy a new one．After school，I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack．The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store．It looked very cool that I could hardly wait to ride it．The shopkeeper told us that it was the latest style．He wanted to charge me for 800yuan，that was too high for me．I just couldn't afford such an expensive one．Then I choose another one，which cost him only 200yuan．It was not perfect，so it was much better than the old one．
詳解：
1．while改為when 考查連詞．while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句表示"段"時(shí)間，此處應(yīng)是"點(diǎn)"時(shí)間，用連詞when．           
2．加to 考查動詞不定式．decide to do sth．意為"決定做某事"，是固定詞組．
3．locating改為located 考查過去分詞．shop與locate之間是動賓關(guān)系，用過去分詞短語located  in the center of the city作后置定語．
4．The改為A 考查冠詞．本句不是特指，而是泛指一輛黑色的自行車，用不定冠詞a．
5．very改為so 考查固定搭配．so…that…意為"如此/這么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副詞，常常用來修飾形容詞或副詞，常用句型為：主語+謂語+so+adj．/adv．+that從句．
6．去掉for 考查詞語用法．charge sb some money意為"向某人要…錢"，是固定詞組．
7．that改為which 考查定語從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語從句，先行詞800 yuan在從句中作主語，用關(guān)系代詞which．
8． choose改為chose 考查動詞時(shí)態(tài)．全文講述的是已發(fā)生的事情，用一般過去時(shí)．
9．him改為me 考查代詞．根據(jù)句意：它僅花了我200元．用代詞me． 
10．so改為but 考查連詞．前后兩個(gè)單句之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而非因果關(guān)系，用連詞but．

點(diǎn)評 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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